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[font=Century Gothic]I wrote dis when i was pretty sloshedd lol, but i think it came out pretty strait. its sposed ta have a chiller feel to it.. anyway, lemme kno what yall thaank! [/font]



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That was pretty good, was feelin it.

you stuck to your flow and your topic well throughout, i'm about to listen to it again.

good work solqet

yeah this was chilled like u said

its nice to see a Female Emcee on here doing Audio
u could have a big impact on Illest

as for ur track

i liked it
ur precence seemed the same
i didnt like that too much
but the lyrics were straight for the most part
seemed u forced a word in or too
or a word made u fall off

but overall

6/10

please feed Empty Dreams
k thanks bye

this was nice
the lyrics were str8
nice laid back beat fot the laid back song
the flow was good precesnse was good
sum emotion thrown in there
shit so overall 7/10
keep'em comin

thankyouu fer da feed you guys.. dis is an olda track, but on da new ones im workin on imma get dat emotion in n im tryin to perfect mah voice n floww.. but i appreciate the help fosho!

whuuuuttt oh damn..I thought this was really good B..

i love the concept..i can relate..

the hook was pretty good..it's a laid back type of song..but
bein from the 808 we're into that alott..

you def got some lyricism in ya..4 real good lycs lotsa meaning
i dont agree w some of the feeders i personally thought ya
presence was fine..
the delivery was the only part that needs work IMO..
but if this was an older one you should be all G now..

any way i want a copy of this track ..please..hahaha

and who do i gotta beg to get you on a track or 2 with me?

no jk..

TreTru wrote:you def got some lyricism in ya..4 real good lycs lotsa meaning
i dont agree w some of the feeders i personally thought ya
presence was fine..
the delivery was the only part that needs work IMO..

Thats exactly what I'm sayin! I don't agree wit these kats at all. For a chick who's been rapping for like a month...ol' girl is the real! Half the niggaz on illest ain't even fuckin wit her on the audio tip! And thats real talk.

Kurse wrote:

TreTru wrote:you def got some lyricism in ya..4 real good lycs lotsa meaning
i dont agree w some of the feeders i personally thought ya
presence was fine..
the delivery was the only part that needs work IMO..

Thats exactly what I'm sayin! I don't agree wit these kats at all. For a chick who's been rapping for like a month...ol' girl is the real! Half the niggaz on illest ain't even fuckin wit her on the audio tip! And thats real talk.

^^hahaha..that's tru she's better than a few cat's..IMO..

lol thankyouu guys! you da bomb. n tretru id luh ta get on a track wit chu, jus lemme kno whats up n well get shit started

not bad, u can definately ride a beat, n apparently only been at it for about month? keep it up, ill look forward to hearin more

Oohh....You Be Suckin That Bong Like Your Lovers Dick..Ha Ha Thats Gangsta I Think That's Fuckin Hot, Wish You Were Here Right Now. You Can Only Get Better, Love To Hear More....Maybe A Petrafyne & Tre Tru Collab In The Future.

True True...when I heard that line, I was like "OoOoOoOoO...I can't believe she went that hard wit that line!!!" lmao

For real...that shit was sick. If there was ever a quotable...that would be it right there! haha

im ill like dat lol

this was good, i felt tha hook tha most. deff a joint i could puff 2... lyrics was good but like som1 said b4, deff work on ya delievery. but if u only been spittin for a month or wateva, then this shit is fire compared ta som shit i herd a cple yrs heads spit in tha past. keep doin ya thang shrty. everything will fall inta place if u work hard enuff.
KEEP ON MIND:
work on ya emotion. i cnt stress enuff how much better emotion will make any trak sound. also, try switcin ya flow up a lil diff ways thru ya verses.
hope this helps...
Keep on spittin.
1~hundred
Prob-Z