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OK 5 bars, verse due by end of monday.

voting categories are

flow
multis
personals
creativity
Punchlines
wordplay

good luck homie.

votes must be explained at least a little, no BS votes/hate votes.

edit ** forgot to add, no feeding.

Aiight Kool.. Good Luck ..

Check ..

ok so... lets do this...



you a 'haz been 'ard (hard)' my punches'll stab through ya heart N batter you
add-n-assume this site'll be 'minus hazard (-.HaZarD)' like 'a padded room!'


make you 'disappear in my palm', grind you to ashes ya mind is backwards
you lack 'material to harm' theres just 'NO SIGN OF HAZARD!!'


'hazard toxic?' no way, ill bury any doubt, 'ill handle this' thing
you blunder n wince, you win? pshhh you couldnt even get 'under my skin!!'


flow to complex for H mop this waste clean the floor with ya face
train wreck ya game, 'H never come before C', Just 'Check my name!!' (C>H)


illiterate dunce, stunned this rookie, you 'illegitimate son', I'm 'past you' dummy
'a prick if you will',battling me 'fucked yaself' cause I really 'son'd this pussy!!'

Ay , i'm Pretty busy right now ..
i'll Prolly Drop tonight , But If i Don't Give me Till tommorow i never No Show..

[align=center]Easy ..

Lyrical Clip In..

I'll Spray A Round N Slay Ya Clown, I Gotta Lay Ya Down..My Nuts You 'Hang On For Dear Life' Like The Football PLAYA FOUND!!..
What Chu CLASS'D B? U Don't Gang Bang U Get Gang'd Bang..Niggas 'Mobb..Deep In ya Ass' Like MAX B!!...

Your Trashy..

I Can Handle Whoever With This Calis Flow,No Reservations you Can't 'Hold Ya Wait' There's No BALANCE HO!
U Write Simple Plays Like Students Prepin 4 The TALENT SHOW!...

No Hospital'll Take Me I'm Careless 2 Whudda GAY SAY SON..Vay Kay Or Get Shun'd N End Up Ona Permanent VACATION..
Flee 2 Another Site Cause DIRT TRAVELS, Like a Cancer Patient With Weak Immunity U'll Lose Ya FIRST BATTLE!...

Ay Blow Job Bitches This Dood's SUCKIN..LEND..a Mouth..So He Can Finish Fuckin Men..
It's Drought Season Your Reign Came 2 a SUDDEN END Cause U Got 'Ran Over' Like Joe BUDDENS FRIEND!!..[/align]

voting categories are

flow - cham edged it out both had good flo's cham's a lil eaisier to read
multis -Haz- some of chems didn't completely rhyme..
personals -none really
creativity -Haz-alot cool concepts..IMO
Punchlines -Haz..were just stronger
wordplay - cham-for all the hazard nameplays..

Cham was aight..and did well tweakin haz's name..but with that
many nameplys limited him from being more expansive with his punches..IMO

good battle though..
VOTE-HAZ

Flow - Cham, He Structured His Verse Well, & it Was a lot Easier to Breeze By ..

Punches - Haz, He Had More Hard Hittin Blows, Some Were Koo, But it Seem Like He Did Enough to Snatch Tha Cat ..

Multies - Haz, More Complex Multies Than Cham`s ..

Personals - Cham, Nameplay Was Rippin Fa Real ..

Creativity - Haz, He Was More Entertainin, & a lot More Complex ..

Vote - Hazard

2-2 ..

uppin

Hazard,
You can disregard a vote.
i know how you are.
so Haze's vote is disregarded

2-1 Hazard

hazard should be dq`d for recycling his last bar haha

^^^ whats this???

No Dead Silence ..
It's 2 To 2..

Keep The Vote's comin ..

alright

Flow-Chameleon
Multis-Hazard
Structure-Tie
Wordplay-Chameleon
Personals(includes nameplay)-Chameleon(You can tell his verse was directed at haz when is haz verse he didnt even mention chameleon)
Punches-Tie(Nothing was Really WOW Though)

Brief:Theres No Doubt in My Mind That Hazard Could Be A Worthy Opponent In The Battle Text Field HOWEVER with Such a Wordy/Forced Flow and Failure To Throw Personal Punchlines The Only Category Ur Looking At Winning Is Multis AND Overall Losing the Battle Next Time..COME HARDER throw Personals In There Ur Verse Looked Like a PreWritten

VOTE CHAMELEON

3-2 me looks like i won, good battle haz.