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A Remix of Jamiroquai's popular 'You Give Me Something' featuring myself. It's a bangin mixture of Pop meets Hip-Hop. Those of you who are already familiar with my work, already know that I have fun trying new things that are "out of my element" so to speak. So I wanted to see if I could drop a flow on something that wasn't a Hip-Hop beat. Personally I'm a Jamiroquai fan...so this is a drop I did just for fun. I hope you all enjoy.

Props to Drunken Jesus for sampling, looping and recreating the original production.
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"You Give Me Something Remix"
Jamiroquai ft. Kurse
Written By: Jay-Kay & R. Bueno
Mixed By: R. Bueno
Sampled By: Drunken Jesus (credits to Jamiroquai©)
Recorded @ B1 Studio in Joliet, IL
Anger Manij'ment Entertainment Inc.
All Rights Reserved 2009 ©

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LYRICS:

1st Verse-
Okay...so there's sumthin about'ya..
tiny Lil tendancies that having me doubt'ya.
And I've heard from the girls that out'ya..
good and plenty things that I can do without'ya!
But I'm not gonna do that see!?..
I believe that there can be a 'you and me'.
It's simple just to see that I'm stuck to thee..
perfect little plant that I grew to be.
But...
..possibly I'm blossoming..
from the seed you drop down in the pottery.
Plant it wit love, and water me..
you're my sunshine...make it hot for me.
Here I go-go, watch me grow-grow..
if I'm crazy for ya mami, call me loco.
If they don't know, mark your set go..
racing to the middle of my heart i bet shows.
You got a lil sumthin that I need..
and I've been beggin and a pleadin for you to give it to me!
Nobody else here can conceive..
all the tiny little things in my life you bring.
If they'd seen then they'd agree..
that the unity of you and me is destiny.
You tend to bring out the best in me..
you're my other half...you're the rest of me.

2nd Verse-
You got my heart beatin out'tha rib-cage..
in many ways, everyday, trapped up in a phase.
I don't mind being hypnotized..
so long as you ain't giving out my luvin to other guys.
You know I trust you...I ain't sweatin..
other guys have tried...but you ain't lettin!
Keep it lock babe, you know what I like..
this lovin that'cha giving me is keepin me high.
I...
..don't mind, I'm right where I want to be..
I don't wanna hear temptation callin me.
So I cover my ears, cuz I'm not hoping to hear..
a lullaby wit'your name when you draw near.
Everything that I fear is gone..
ever since you got here I'm no longer feelin alone.
Cradle wit love, you keep my soul..
and it made it's own home in your heart atone.
Moving along, you know tha deal..
little mama right here gimme sumthin the feel.
Got my mind doin circles like a ferris wheel..
keepin it real, got a killa sex appeal!
Yea (Yea), I been waitin for a minute now..
and I'm not tryin to play you wit a gimmick now.
When it come to us, I ain't never frontin..
Baby girl...you really give me sumthin.

dis is da shiiit! i luh it. da samples so hot, n i think you flowed real good to it Kurse, it makes meh wanna dance hahaaa n da lyrics are cute as hell lol

ya flow maybe alil off for this beat
i liked the song as a whole though
nice u experimentin wit shyt
this was pretty well made with beat props to DJ
the lyrics were pretty straight dope shyt
man did sumin new pulled it off well
keep'em comin

I don't know man.. I'm not a big fan of this. I thought the beat was dope and I really enjoyed the chorus. You flowed well over it.. but it's just something about your voice that makes it not work, and that's just my opinion. It just doesn't seem to mesh well with that sort of shit, at least I didn't think it did here. It's definitely cool your experimenting with different shit though, it's always a good thing.. but like I said, I'm not a big fan.

Anyways, keep doin your thing.

^what he said bout ur voice.like i said before
just not ur style
i needed the lyrics just to know what u were saying
i couldnt get into it. and couldnt pay attn.

^ That becuz you have A.D.D.
...not becuz I'm not clear. lol

that^
could be seen as a very low blow
ya know concrete scraping sorta shyt
lol j/p

I gotta disagree wit sum of da niggaz on dis I thought it was dope beat was off da chain DJ snappin on dat shit lyrics were good too I understood em think its cuz so many niggaz on here aren't use 2 u doin' sumthin different they look at ur other work and judge it same shit goes 2 da club tracks dat you've made if its da shit and I'm feelin' it i gotta bump it so dats wats up and u can't go wrong wit da nigga Jamiroquai on da hook dats wats up lol

I Feel The Way Your Emotion Was Pushin But I Feel That Most Of Your Timing Was Off Point And Sounded Rushed A Lil....To Me Anyways....A Lil Better On The Mixin Could Make Everything Sound Right.

Jamiroquai!!! HAHAHAHA that dude's the shit!! this is okay though... it's ain't bad though. Im diggin the idea though. the flow is on point... i think i'd like the flow a lil slower though... like riding the beat's rhythm more so i can groove to this shit AND listen to your lyrics! cause the flows is almost so quick that someone would either ignore you and just 2 step it to the beat and sing the hook or try to listen to you and not bounce to it cause they tryin to catch was ya saying. ya dig? could you picture a fan driving around bumpin this and rappin the verses at this speed on this groovey ass beat?

personally i like this shit.

started listening to it an i was like "hmmmm i dunno" but as it went on it definately grew on me.

second listen i was bobbin my head and shit.

the samplin is well done, good one DJ, flow is definately on point kurse.

good stuff. keep em coming dude

feelin tha beat. som1 said thay didnt like how fast ya verse was, but i like tha fast flow homie. this joint different, n ya boy problmz likes tha different type joints all day.
keep droppin big homie, this was good.
~1
Problemz

i think you killed this one pretty thoroughly..and i dont think ya timing was
off..ya flow and schemes were solid..this is that shyt i like it cause it's
different..i'm into hiphop lyrics on trippy ass beats..haha

Jam is the man and MAJOR props to DJ for that cut ..4 real..

verses had good meaning presence was where it shoulda been mixing
was dope..

i do gotta be honest and say it did sound a lil rushed on da wording ..
but i think that's more on individual taste then a actual fact..hahaha

anyway this is a dope song and you need to have genre crossing songs
like this to expand your audience base..if you truly want to be a successful
ARTIST in this game..aight 1

i Thought This Was Pretty ill ..
Nice Switch Up ..
That Beat is Bananaz i Love it ..

lol i gotta admit when i read the title im like did kurse really do it..?andd he did! haha,not bad man..not one of my personal favs but u rocked it pretty good..i think if u practiced ur verses more ur delivery cudda been more like..hyped u kno?its good dont gimme wrong just i think u held back a lil bit..besides that big homie keep it up.