A Comeback

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i need to get back into writin as my mic n shyt are gone for now so here's sumin real quick

i'm back gettin rid of explosive-gases my lyrics of corrosive-acid
got ya planet spinnin on a broken-axis enough torture open-lashes
madness why do u proceed to cloak-n-stagger piercing words rope-the-dagger
i hope-this-swagger doesn't confuse u too much like astro-physics
poisonous gases-hold-lyrics like ghosts trapped to mask-old-spirits
you have to crave-my-intelligence got u knowing nothing a slave-to-embellishment
my lyrics like igneous rock ageless-like-elements are u praying-for-relevance?
i'll buy the graves-i'm-so-decodant straight gutless like raving-with-skeletons
depraving-all-hate at home i'm-slaving-all-day readin ya lyrics
but this may get back to me i'm-payin-to-say appear to be-strayin-away

Lets Try Sum Deep Mystical Shyt

beyond the valley-there-demons i try to parry-these-heathens
the bearer i carry-my-feelings away from the scallies-to-see-them
the gas-chamber-gift is death the handkerchief yet remains past-dangerous
shoes on the road show the last-haters-sift thru gases of the last-fakers-mist
how can you challenge me when u apply pressure to air confess ya to scared
the clouds around the top of the mountains are doubtin gainst hatin n shoutin
rapein n cloutin murderers shud all die screw all the ratin n boutin

[GrimBlaze]

"the gas-chamber-gift is death the handkerchief yet remains past-dangerous
shoes on the road show the last-haters-sift thru gases of the last-fakers-mist "

^^fave line
nice drop, flow was a bit choppy at times but i think thats down to syllables in the sentence, felt like some lines had a few excess words here and there.

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[MesaR]

thought this pretty dope fam some forced multis and abit fucked up vocab here and there, but overall this was pretty fresh

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thanks for all the feed will be returned