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Chorus (2X):
just a new day.
(its just a new day.)
living this way
(im just living this way)
getting my pay
(im getting my pay)
its just a new day.
(its just a new day)

Verse One (Dead Silence):
its only me setting the trends to be//
if only i could see the 1 before the 3//
bad luck,im sitting here a tad struck//
how i just can not give a fuck//
thoughts crushing me like a truck//
how can i believe in what they call trust//
when i cant even believe in myself//
holding out my hand to guide you to help//
the pain u have i already felt//
my cards have already been delt//
im feeling so sick as i cover these scars//
so now i sit and aim for the stars//
people telling me i wont get far//
because i never seem to up to par//
its just another day in this life of mine//
and thats what makes me one of a kind//

Chorus (2X):
just a new day.
(its just a new day.)
living this way
(im just living this way)
getting my pay
(im getting my pay)
its just a new day.
(its just a new day)

Verse 2 (Tramatik):
im starin at the page just swearin with rage
im'a dog locked up just tearin at my cage
not carin what i say temper flarin up 2day
look i bet nobody is aware that i may
finally go nuts an snap on these kats
step back and pulla few straps from my hat
nah hold up for real what kinda crap is that?
they laugh at me for tryna rap on'a track
they say quit man u wack vince
i turned away havent looked back since
theres gotta be a way to expose the truth
pin point the bullshit an show to u
i am what i am my flow is true
my pen is my tongue cant control it dude
lemme stop u all from what u bout to say
look im movin on so get out my way


Chorus (2X):
just a new day.
(its just a new day.)
living this way
(im just living this way)
getting my pay
(im getting my pay)
its just a new day.
(its just a new day)

Bridge:
Its just a new day.
Im Just Living This Way.
Im getting my pay.
Its just a new day.

Verse 3 (Dead Silence):
im running my life right off of these tracks//
i gotta take a second just to step back//
and look at all the lies i believed in//
and all the presents i never received and//
all the pain i had to endure//
and i cant do this i gotta be pure//
gotta listen to my heart thru all the tough times//
my lifes tore apart and i write these lines//
spill my blood out on this pad//
and not giving a fuck bout what i never had//
never shall i take life for granted again//
because theres a positive at the end//
no matter what i do im going to make it//
because whatever u have i am going to take it
and make the best outta every situation//
and pass it down to my future generation//

Chorus (2X):
just a new day.
(its just a new day.)
living this way
(im just living this way)
getting my pay
(im getting my pay)
its just a new day.
(its just a new day)

aye man,that echo/reverb or whatever u put on my verse fucked it up to be honest..i listened to it quite a few times and before,it was almost real clear quality since i switched mics. now its like..uhhhh lol. idk dude,it fucked my part up i believe. i tried gettin@u on AIM before u posted it so u cud change it but u didnt answer but its kool just wonderin if u cud change it to how it was so the ppl can actually hear me. i still got my verse an double ups seperate an shit,get at me man.

well ur double ups had a weird ringing noise in it
i tried to fix it
it was just weird
i tried to cover it up a bit tho

well ur double ups had a weird ringing noise in it
i tried to fix it
it was just weird
i tried to cover it up a bit tho

I Guess you Could Say Your Improvin Dead Silence..
U Really Needa Chill With The Wierd Voice Though..
Change ya Pitch Please.. And Feel The Music
Don't Force When U Spit... U Needa Get Into Ya Zone So It Go's Smoothly..
Most Of The Time That Happens NOT HIGH...
Props For Ya Determination..

Vince..

U Needa Switch The Tone Of ya Voice.. Put More Emphasis , Emotion..
No Problems With The Lyrics.. Adlibs Are Fucked Up LoL ...
Anyways Nice Hearin Somethin From U ..


Both Of You Needa Keep Droppin