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GrimBlaze
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Post by GrimBlaze »

nice little key, flowed well.

liked the finish

Almost Wishin That Tha Pad Spoke With Tha Pen
There's Just No Will But Tha Hope is Here
Keep Tryin To Think While There's No Focus Near
it's Called Writers Block.... Tha Pen Never Spoke This Clear

although to be a pedantic idiot,
if its called writers block would the pen speak all that clearly???
lol

nice piece anyway.
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Post by Glamtrash »

I like it.

i Stare At Tha Pad With A Hopeless Gaze
Words Blockin My Brain Cuz i Havent Smoked in Days
i Cant Write When i Dont Smoke Tha Haze


ME NEITHER. Lol I can't sleep either, hence why I'm feeding your shit at four in the morning. This is my favourite bit if only because I relate.

All in all it's a decent little drop, flowed well. Could have been longer but the shortness of it relates well to the topic (I know it's standard, I'm just a fan of longer shit lol).

So go get yourself some green n drop some more shit.
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