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uh

Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:09 am
by ~Symbolikull~
im quik to the point, hold up im to sick to destroy,
spit n deploy, weaponry when a bics hittin the joint,
im back wit the site, wit magic like its tragic tonight,
like crack ona mic, a savage might is collapsin ur pipes,
harnest the rage, im an artist put my heart ina page,
the hardest in range, most yall rep wit garbage portayed,
i rep tip in my hood, u feel good? take a trip in my hood,
it ain finna be good, im thinkin u should ur wishin u could,
get smacked witta axe, slapped witta mac cracked witta bat,
slapped wit the back, hand clapped witta mag actin like that,
u seen into deep? ill strip u, then let my poolstick fist u,
this dude! ghost is crazy yeah ill send ur fam some gifts too,

Re: uh

Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:13 am
by complexity
I like the flow.

"get smacked witta axe, slapped witta mac cracked witta bat,
slapped wit the back, hand clapped witta mag"

How about you put some of your signature into your profile. Lol.

Re: uh

Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:35 am
by GrimBlaze
piece was pretty good, flow was solid as where rhymeschemes.
standard content.

harnest the rage, im an artist put my heart ina page,
the hardest in range, most yall rep wit garbage portayed,

nice.1.

Re: uh

Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:42 am
by Phasewon
dope shit, a couple forced multies, seemed like some rushed shit, but other than that, everything was on point, ill flow, ill structure, sick rhyme scheme, all around solid lyrical verse, stay at it.

Re: uh

Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 8:17 am
by K KiLLaH
sick multi display

Re: uh

Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 11:28 pm
by Haz
get smacked witta axe, slapped witta mac cracked witta bat,

^ That was Straight

slapped wit the back, hand clapped witta mag actin like that,

^ What The Hell Was This? LOL You Wen't Cam'ron On Us...


Anyways This was Average, Keep droppin