Re: Recent verse.
Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 7:47 pm
its an improvement on your previous drops.
your structure still needs work cos writin in that style makes it read like some ramblin shit which in turn devalues the drop.
lyrically you where better this time too, once you ease up on the filler material, you gonna be just fine.
but structure is what let this piece down the most.
keep droppin.1.
your structure still needs work cos writin in that style makes it read like some ramblin shit which in turn devalues the drop.
lyrically you where better this time too, once you ease up on the filler material, you gonna be just fine.
but structure is what let this piece down the most.
keep droppin.1.