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punches
flow
rhymescheme(multies)
wordplay
nameplay
personals
complexity
creativity
entertainment

There iz a 6 Bar Minimum & 10 Bar Total
(You can go over if you want)
Post due in 48 hrs & 3 votes win, 4 votes T.K.O
Good Luck & may the best emcee win!!

- NoVeL

Check im posting 20 lines today

uppin for both verses

For those who dont know ladyluck another member on the site is his chick or exchick or whatever


Str8 shushd em!! I aint even speak n K shook em/
When it comes ta FAG NOVELs, ima leave a GAY BOOKIN/
I aint even lookin but eye see right thru em..
N my fists'll black blue em like he's 3 times 2'n!!/(crip'n)
Lyrically misconstrue em/ yo this guy is an oak/
He couldn't liven up his rhymen rocking vitamin qoutes/
He aint nuttin but a "HERB" so ill fire the toast/
Smoking MARY JANE on da WEB like SPIDERMAN JOKES!!/
This dikes a damn dope while I lick n sniff lines/
So if I can't feel my face it aint cuz this bitch rhymes/
I glow n script shine that'll hold dis prick blind/
Novel couldn't "C" "K" throwing diss ta cripz signs/
Aiyo ill make ya bitch mine while I mock ya frees/
Ya girls fast while ya rocking NO VELocity/
Her legs front doors I'm coming in ya property/
Hit LADY LUCK Like the Lottery!!
Tryna rock with me? Ill rip NOV n then give em this EL/
He couldn't symbolize bars with egyptians in cells/
You'll never hear a soul quote em tried ta find his author n smoke em/
Asked em who or what wrote//rode em his reply was man scotum!!/
Hes a No1 not RELL and his Ruges are fake/
Left NOV ICE'd like NEWBS WITH SKATES!!/

Check it

You a Faggot K Killah & I don't wanna do you,
You thinkin your the shit right?
Well its because your rhyme's really doo-doo.
Rep lookin like poop & you dealin wit NoVeL,
An emcee whose got multiple screws loose.
What I'm speakin iz truth a young mic that be in the booth,
Punch-lines got hot lyrics,
but my words iced like I'm keepin it cool,
I'm nice but you'lle lose teeth in the duel,
I went 2 hard knocks when you wasn't even in school.
Listen Homie keep pressin yah luck,
I dont give a fuck
I'll put the iron 2 yah clothes & give you a mean look,
Like that cripsy nylon finish, reason Y you aint makin da band 1
Iz bcuz of yah ignorant dylon image!!
Yah weak & you'lle get blitzed on da mic,
Tryin 2 get pass this long line of scrimmage.

Your a fag that be stabbed,
after a long night in queens beefin wit da boulevard drags.
Here's a hint 2 better emceein,
stop suckin my penis & uh....
dressin your rhymes up like clothes on a manickan.
K Killah whose illa?
I'll smack the bitch out of you so hard,
You'lle turn into a man again!!
Cuz in this battle wanna of us iz gonna bleed,
like tye dye T- shirts & it aint gonna be me!!
I see yah faith need glasses cuz you aint willin 2 believe,
That I AM a better emcee.
Repeat that like your tracks skipped,
over my lyrically crack CD's.
I'm your Idol homie, you know you wanna be me.
Watchin me over your momma's flat screen TV,
Cuz I take my time wit this rap shit
Like yah grandma strugglin when she defficates feces.

- NoVeL

Please vote on my battle with

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/teflo ... 13086.html

Anyways pretty blah battle here, but...


punches- Killa
flow- Novel
rhymescheme(multies)- Killa
wordplay- Killa
nameplay-Killa


Pretty one sided Novel's rhymes and punches were kinda simple concepts were ok just didn't hit too hard...So

Vote= K Killa

Please try and vote on any of my battles I got a few to choose from but if you can hit the one up I have the link with in this post thanks fellas. Keep elevatin and keep the activity up, battlying and voting
personals
complexity
creativity
entertainment

punches - Killah
flow - Killah
rhymescheme(multies) - Killah
wordplay - be serious
nameplay - I guess killah
personals - Novel
complexity - Killah
creativity - Killah
entertainment - Killah

One sided all the way
Battle me both of you 1 on 1

alright k killa won this by a landslide

cat sweep..no point in even listing them from here

3-0 k killa wins

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