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No dickryding votes this kids 11-0 so no bullshit need all the help I can get haha
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I'll be droppin by tonight idc who drops first just drop soon.

ima drop by tonight

No talk straight to the point...


Really, This kid is gay and his spits are played..Not nearly on cue
And my rhymes are sick with Aids..So yeah, I went Eazy on you
Don’t act like you get chicks, We know how gay dudes ride
This Gooney jumps in rooms with nude dudes like, HEY YOU GUYS!
And I know you're bring your 'A' game when u meddle with vets
You're staying on your toes, But it's time to give those stilettos a rest!!
Take this hollow tip along wit ya pride and swallow it..
I'd say you're off to a Rocky start..But your verse is A-pollo shit

*Let me finish this kid first loss coming now*

Practice your writing those tactics are wasted, every passage created mades to aggravate gay pricks
Shatter your frame with hatchet and blade tips, and you can just watch me sign my axe with your face bitch!!



Hope that's enough came as hard I could...Hope you drop tonight get the voting started...Goodluck man

yo ima hit this up after work today...

Come on man a bunch of people have already prolly check this battle out they keep looking at it and my verse keeps looking older and older, I understand if ur busy man but you said you'd drop I did you didn't now you say today almost 8 come on homie...No biggy just making my verse loook old.

Really, This kid is gay and his spits are played..Not nearly on cue
And my rhymes are sick with Aids..So yeah, I went Eazy on you

LMAO @ this line.. it was funny as fuck but it was kinda weak

Don’t act like you get chicks, We know how gay dudes ride
This Gooney jumps in rooms with nude dudes like, HEY YOU GUYS!

funny.. lmao but weak yo.. you should try to work
on more execution.. more creative concepts and etc..

And I know you're bring your 'A' game when u meddle with vets
You're staying on your toes, But it's time to give those stilettos a rest!!

LoL first nice line in your bar..
but try to lay off the gay jokes..don't be repetitive with them..
this was your best bar IMO...although it was kinda played..

Take this hollow tip along wit ya pride and swallow it..
I'd say you're off to a Rocky start..But your verse is A-pollo shit

hmm nah..this was creative..wording was good
but the build up was better then the punch nahh mean...
I Wasn't feeling this.. you have cool multis tho.. you dont really have feeler

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Im Marvelous Ock Plus My Bizarre Spitting Stops..This Emcee From Committing Hard Hitting Shots/
Hard?...He Is Not...Cause Jay Quick To Rip Tef (teff) In Pieces As If I Was Harvesting Crops!!!//

Pretty cool bar.. nice multis through the bar were nice..flowed smoothly
the set up was decent.. punch was pretty decent..
overall A Smooth Opener..nice...

Brace Yaself...And Be Prepared To Take An L...Cause Jay Aint Takin Bout Mobile Malfunctions When I Break Ya Cell!/
Swing At His Frame With A Bat Till His Face Is Swelled...He Got NWO In His Sig So We All Know Hes Fake As Hell!!!//

LoL...nice flow... concept was cool...creative.. but I think this was mediocre coming from you..
but chea...

Leave Him Battered Wit Ease...Teflon Beating Jay? Hahaha Thats Laughter To Me...In Other Words You Suck And Ya Faggot Ass Team/
So Keep Running Ya Mouth And I'll Splatter Ya Spleen. Teflon's Rap Career In A Glass Box..So Watch Me Shatter His Dreams!!!///damn

LoL I just realized your flow is long as hell...but it flows together and it isnt stretched but yeah
this line was a pretty coool universal...semi-decent punch..Could of been better
nice set up tho..creative..the sting seemed halfed tho..still a cool read tho


I'll Break Ya Chest Jerk....Its Obvious That Jay Has The Best Verse/
So Watch As I Put A End To This Tef Lon (tough lawn) Like Landscaping Experts!!!//

LoL...cool closer...simile punches are cool, so don't overload on them
alright closer... name play was predictable..but it was cool

Flow - Teflon
Multis - Jay..
Creativity -Jay...Tef kept coming at him with gay bars lol
Punches - Jay...pretty obvious IMO
Personals - N/a


V/JayGunna...this was an alright battle...pretty one sided..
jay gunna took this with lines with more sting...Teflon..keep at it my dude..and just elevate

Duce you know I had two more lines in this battle also idk if you missed them or just didn't bother to quote and review them the lines were....

*Practice your writing those tactics are wasted, every passage created mades to aggravate gay pricks
Shatter your frame with hatchet and blade tips, and you can just watch me sign my axe with your face bitch!!*


Aight nice verse Jay, 1-0 you keep the voting coming please.

yo Could you go on the second page
And bump me Vs Kahlua.. i dropped my verse.. I'd appreciate it..

Ight im new so imma explain my vote....

Teflon Lines:
Don’t act like you get chicks, We know how gay dudes ride
This Gooney jumps in rooms with nude dudes like, HEY YOU GUYS!
And I know you're bring your 'A' game when u meddle with vets
You're staying on your toes, But it's time to give those stilettos a rest!!

(thought they was ya best bars)

Jay Lines:
So Keep Running Ya Mouth And I'll Splatter Ya Spleen. Teflon's Rap Career In A Glass Box..So Watch Me Shatter His Dreams!!!/
I'll Break Ya Chest Jerk....Its Obvious That Jay Has The Best Verse/
So Watch As I Put A End To This Tef Lon (tough lawn) Like Landscaping Experts!!!//lol

(thought this was ya best bars)


Flow: Tef
Wordplay: Jay
Multies: Jay
Creativity: Jay
Excitement: Jay
Punches Jay

Vote: Jay Gunna
Reason:...i jus thought Jay brought it...his punches n wordplay was a beast in this battle...that was my decision

Teflon wrote:Duce you know I had two more lines in this battle also idk if you missed them or just didn't bother to quote and review them the lines were....

*Practice your writing those tactics are wasted, every passage created mades to aggravate gay pricks
Shatter your frame with hatchet and blade tips, and you can just watch me sign my axe with your face bitch!!*


Aight nice verse Jay, 1-0 you keep the voting coming please.

I got it.. I Just didnt get to copy and paste it..

Man thoguth I stood a chance, guess not lol...But uppin for a few more don't need to be koed, thanks for voting fellas

i'll vote if no one votes by tonight, uppin for the voters..

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