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10 Lines/5 Bars
First to 5, 3-0=KO
No dickryding votes
Check In before you drop ur verse
Drop before tomorrow night.

Here's my check in, I will be droppin late tonight or tomorrow when I get out of work.

Aight hope you drop soon don't want my verse sitting up too long...


You ain't a battler man, so dissing me is kinda useless G..
Do something worthwhile, and write a topical about what it's like to lose to me!
You're probably ugly, and along with that you're annoying and wack
Like the sidewalk game, because your mother should have avoided the crack...
You're not much to me, and my fists will really damage ya man..
You suck? Trust me I know it, like YOU know the back of my hand!
Ostee about to get railroad'd, having trouble getting in the lane?
Tef'll put ya back on track....Just to hit you with the train!

Finish Him!!!

Ostee Perosis, Teflons explosive face it son you're just wack
Matter of fact, I bet he doesn't even use a Punchline this bitch uses a Slap!



Alright homie goodluck drop soon please

Idk ostee it seems to me like you have an accent or something anyways heres how i have it.

PERSONALS-NO1 not one personal thrown the whole match

MULTIS-TEFLON like i said O ur accent is killin me do you pronounce look like luke ta make it rhyme with fruit? idk man u gotta fix that shit

PUNCHES-TEFLON the hit harder

FLOW-DRAW EVEN though it was hard for me to spot O's Rhymes He hah a flow u could see it off the structure the delivery just killed it tho

WORDPLAY-TEFLON, O in a weak attempt u tried to flip TEFs verse and used the exact same wordplay u gotta come more original and crowd shocking than that.

Overall: Teflon HOWEVER tef you only won because ur first four lines were hrd enough to crush Ostees whole verse after those first 4 lines you fell off the fucking map and contradicted ur own punchlines with that whole slapping bizness anyways im just letting u know u gotta come twenty times harder if u wanna beat cee4

well bein in the same crew didn't same to matter, so here's a break down on each verse

-Teflon-

You ain't a battler man, so dissing me is kinda useless G..
Do something worthwhile, and write a topical about what it's like to lose to me!

the punch was ok..not that great,

You're probably ugly, and along with that you're annoying and wack
Like the sidewalk game, because your mother should have avoided the crack...

just plain weak

You're not much to me, and my fists will really damage ya man..
You suck? Trust me I know it, like YOU know the back of my hand!

this was ok..punchline to a recognized hand..got it

Ostee about to get railroad'd, having trouble getting in the lane?
Tef'll put ya back on track....Just to hit you with the train!

eh..weak, i get the railroad track train connection..but weak none the less

Ostee Perosis, Teflons explosive face it son you're just wack
Matter of fact, I bet he doesn't even use a Punchline this bitch uses a Slap!

weak punch as well..


overall:..weak punches but one or 2 decent puns.rhymescheme was on n off..mostly off..creativity was weak..no wordplay..no real personals once again except for that ostee perosis line which is probably where he got the name in the first place...who knows..




-Ostee-

Phony lines from a Self-Caricatured/
How sad is that? Just check out that profile picture/

bad attempt at a personal, no punchline here..better off as a filler

Why askin, matter of fact; THINKIN about ma looks?!??!/
Ya aint lyrically inclined!/Ya Sexually Self-Undefined, Ya fuckin Fruit!/
So ya damn rite, wont punchline on a fag/ i bitch slap you back to yo genome roots/

hm..weak personal...just a bunch of talking referring him to a fag for thinking about ur looks..nothing hard hitting here

Then i guess you "RODE" those "RAILS"/ Dont wanna get in your LANE!
This spot is no place to roll, recline or TRAIN/
I see ya so lame ya'll probably ride a tail for a tale/

yea yea. i get it..train rails and road lanes...then mentioning how he rides for a story(if that's about right..)any real message here is unclear.. there's no punchline here and the creativity is weak

I mean a "TRACK" from those emcees we call wack!!/
Leave those gangsta fantasises to todays rap/

no punchline here..u refer back to track as in railroad tracks from the previous bar..nothing impressive to be honest


overall:....no rhymescheme.. no wordplay...no punches, bad attempt at creativity...weak personals...all u really did was a horrible job at flipping his verse..could've been more original..need i say more?


this battle on a scale from 1-10

ostee = 1/10 (u need to take my advice and practice more)
teflon = 3/10 (i seen better from..barely worth for this)

weak battle overall.. still my vote is for teflon..

Up

All the posts were deleted cause they are filler...And yo I didn't say anything, but basically what you did isn't cheating but its one of those things that really isn't allowed every line of your verse played off of mine..Really it's not fair you waited for me to drop and then used my verse to write yours, that's what Much is saying...But yea we can't keep posting like this in the thread it's freeposting filler...But it's ur call on his vote counting...Cool that u are at this point it prolly won't get finished til next year neways lol

well nowhere did it say u cant flip so its not like its not allowed,

still 2-0 teflon leads, thread was cleaned up due to freeposts, uppin for voters

Up please 2-0 me

bump...its a simple battle to vote on..get to it people

V/ Teflon... I'm Just Voting On Battles All Around To Help The Sites Activity..
It Wasn't He Had The Better Verse..Cause That Battle Verse Was Weaker..
its That...Tef strongest lines were better then Ostee's better lines... and Ostee's worse lines were worser then Tef's worse lines.. i'll go into more depth detail if needed...

fuck the details right now..battle grounds is slackin with votes

3-0 teflon wins

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