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yah boy, Q dah Don back in dah building!!

[b]I Destroy the typical Rapz, wid synical tracks bout litteral facts
i don't hide behinfd the truth, like you dudez and Pitifull Catz
take your Rituals Back, we ain't Feeling yah dumb-Ness!
mah punches leaving more holes in yah face than HAlloween pumpkins
when dah clip Full, your shit stole ... and i'm a splatter yah melon,
cuz i'm Packing Eleven Red beamz tah send your team of Crackerz to heaven
fuge packer, your Dead when ... we start wid a battle; i'm sharp wid dah Rattle!
bob and weave and leave your Head in the streets ... and your Heart in the Gravel!
impecable Style, i whipe mah face wid Bills, like old President-iual Towels!
I'm dangereous cuz when i swing, I intend to hit you ... like an Intentional foul
i hang wid dah real catz wid Rugez and chambers, your Dudes Indanger!
mah Ruthless Anger has me around 'more blades' than the New York Rangers[/b]

This Was A Pretty Nice Drop
Punches Were Okay...Flow Was Dope..Multis Was Dope
Your Flow Has Improved...Just Try Incorporating The
Same Impact From Your Long Bar Style To A Short Bar Style..

Not Saying Anything Is Wrong With Long Style..But Yeah


Cool Drop..

7.5/10

THANKS FOR THE FEED DOGGY!

this was oKay, more a swag piece than anything stand out..

pumpkin line been done to death,

dont know why, but presidential was funny, gravel line was cool too, things where worded nice, i'd work on content and making the joint a bit longer

keep doin'..

better than your usual shit. nice improvement.
7.5/10