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My style changes with the season and tide/
These demons inside give you a new reason to hide/
Treason and pride, but there's still a sense of achievement/
Like bees to a hive, haters swarm with endless bereavement/
But they should question their reasons before they step to a genius/
Cuz it'll be over faster than sex with a sensitive penis/
Nothin less than prestigous, its like I'm breathin in fire/
I'm blessed with this heat but no need to preach to the choir/
Many seem to admire, but it can lead to disaster/
I'm the bastard that sticks out like spilled bleach on a black shirt/
Believe I'm the master, yer just a slave to the words/
To say I created a verse that isn't great is absurd/
Its fabricated or worse, in fact its a lie/
Its crap in my eyes and its attractin the flies/
So much passion resides but you'd be none the wiser/
Returned and brung the fire, just don't repeat this in front of minors/


Been a while...

Im really feeling this man.

I love the multis and the flow was on point :
Treason and pride, but there's still a sense of achievement/
Like bees to a hive, haters swarm with endless bereavement/

My fave lines

fuck that's weird as.. you had the words demons inside, in ur drop and so do i.. shit i didnt even check this drop out till i forgot about the link rule

pretty dope lines, i liked the concept of the punches
had good flow.

Many seem to admire, but it can lead to disaster/
I'm the bastard that sticks out like spilled bleach on a black shirt/

^ didnt like it..


i thought the first half of ur verse was better then the second..

this was illy man u killed it homie... shit was dope the only complaint is that it ended i could read 2 pages of that flow lol....

u already know...that flow is pure CRACK!!

this shit was fuckin' ill, multies, punches, the flow was crazy, no complaints, all around flawless lyrical shit.

this shit is tough i heard u were ill so i had to check something out you def didnt disappoint

this is pretty ill homie, too short tho, good multis, good punches, i didnt like the ending to much, but everything else was fire..

i give it an 8/10


keep it up homie