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my rhymes rev more engines than the fast and the furious
you ask if i'm serious? competition???
shit i'm smashin um period! like i was a hammer on an anvil
i'm spitting slander in a stand still
i'm dirty and dangerous like a panther in a land fill
enough to get a man killed.. fuckin with me
im like a mideval dentist the way i be bustin them teeth
you nothin to me!!! like a negative zero
my verses are like genetic viriuses that be plaguin ur heros
i'm makin ya fearfull.... dont play dumb
i'm like the bad dream that you cannot wake from
i take crumbs, and gather my supply
harder than concrete, just check the fractures that i apply
the bastard you hate to like, rippin again
fuck a written plan!!! i could scribble an i would win
evil, but i promise i have a good twin!!
but hes been murdered an unsolved crime i consider a good win
i could spin, anything around and back at you
i murder in numbers and have no problem attackin rap crews
this cat ll smack you, an change facial features
i'm like broncitius to rappers im quick to take your speakers
and rape your teachers, to prove u dont know shit
than dissapear and reappear so youll swear you seen a ghost spit


just a keystyle,, uppin for some feed

catchy style nice flow

thanks uppin

this did have a cathcy flow
stayed on that layout
nice lines in there
kinda unique i thought
i think the title coulda been better
but it was quite good any how
keep'em comin

wow dope intro man, luved the majority of these lines and the flow was superb. Instead of just doing a keystyle go hard on a serious real drop with consistant verses cuz i think u more than capable

fav lines:
my rhymes rev more engines than the fast and the furious
you ask if i'm serious? competition???
shit i'm smashin um period! like i was a hammer on an anvil

7/10