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i saw holloywood jesus n tried to confront him but some other dudes decided to jump in the mix lol

white text = me

Hey Zues its KiLLaH i stays loose/
I'll run up in ya spot with shots like grey goose
TheRuckus » whip out the SS, not the cops that hate Jews/
Its the glock that sprays dudes, just watch today's news/

Muchacho Man » too hot for played tunes, switch up the radio activity n drop grenades through/
new plan B to stop an AIDS flu, but population's growin..we need option A too

A2? I ate dudes ball harder than A U /
Smoked like mike jone's swishas I dare ya ta say who/
Opponents keep guessin like niggas that play clue/
But KiLLaHs been the answer since iverson made shoes/
Im up in zales killing jewels like hitler copped/
Guess its time for a takeover like hitlers watch
I can sell you anything without pitching rocks/
cuz the hustles bona-fied like stifflers cock/
ya boyz sick but i aint tryna catch venereals ock/
thats why im gettin mad tops like ya cereal box/
i post fly like a maggot scriptin arial drops/
pimpin diggin in ya fam like burial plots/
i kick whips like my steel tips steering the drop/
so i be chainin niggas down like marrying locks/
u see me carrying knox baby ima cash cow/
my cashflows enough to make jones smack dow/
lil nigga wanted beef tried ta "tellem" back down/
but he had to be a "soulja" got plucked like waxed brows /
Im what you niggas lack wow so you can call me a dick/
Birthed you niggas n bare fangs so you can call me a bitch/
Get scratched off like lotto so im calling you itch/
When on my GRIND i LOADS UP you can call me the CLIPSE/
Mutual - » like ma style an swagg it aint gonna switch/
played out like a "banana" thats why i split /

like da legs of chickens who strip, copped a beer for da sips/
walked into a gay club n dropped a queer for the kicks/
If ima pussy RUN AWAY if ya cherish ya dick/
cuz if you try ta wet me up ill bring a flare ta ya lips/
my flows unbearable bitch like a sudden extinction/
Shoving mics up in ya nose like wtf was ya thinking/
I'm bound ta blow up like explosions n blimping/
Cuz the game married the truth like proposing ta lincoln/
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Post by - Mutual - »

this is pretty good
nice smooth ish
lil bit choppy in places
but overall pretty good
the best bit is the bit in red lol
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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lol no doubt
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shit was pretty dope, liked the flow
get at me 4 a collab sometime
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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make a theme n get at me im all for it im not that organized thats why all i do is freestyle and text bttle instead of writing songz n recording
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Post by eMCee Havic »

yeah thats the way to do, just str8 flow.. great delievery k killah. liked it, it flowed well for me the whole way.. nice key homie, id give it a 8/10 as far as keys go.. keep that fire in place

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