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if this is a str8 free like you say, than its dope. dug the beat. lyrics were fire. another sym classic for sure.
i could tell you got skills homie, flowing is the only way to tell skills i think, and in that perpect your skilled ..
dope drop homie

peace

-- Mon Jun 01, 2009 8:43 am --

damn i said skills skill and skilled

yeah its mos def a free... smoked a joint and had a realization that i needed to spit.. lol

thanx for the feed

uppin

honestly u need a rawer clearer delivery i barely hear the punches all i realiZe is the multi work which was pretty insane just spit more punctual u gotta be ur own hype man and spit with more personality like when u say something say it how you would in a conversation when u get mad get mad when u get cocky get cocky when u ask a question do it in that tone ya know what i mean cassidy and jay-z do it best if u need reference ta what im saying

mayne dope beat
the multies were fire aswell
the flow i found nice aswell
this was one completely dope song overall a nice freestyle
keep'em comin

yeah i know my delivery ain right yet, but thanx for the tips ill keep that in mind the next time i step in the booth man... appreciate the feed

uppin

hey this shit goes pretty damn hard kid...