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Teflon Vs. Modern Defiance (Teflon)

Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 12:47 pm
by eMCee Havic
8 barrs

rules

personals
wordplay
punches
flow
metaphores
nameplay
overall

verses due by next tuesday (im turnin 21 on friday, so i'll be wasted for a while)

Re: Teflon Vs. Modern Defiance

Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:24 am
by Teflon
Calling me out you cant be serious thinking you can beat me ho
You got a better chance no showing to avoid the embarassment bro


Ok..let's get started for real now...



Modern cant beat me, this mans a fucking bitch
Sure he's Fly with punches...It's the Landings he struggles with!!
Secondly fuck you, Modern check ur win record big zero like ur life
He wanted to battle me, so he can use my rhymes on another site!!
Means nothin to me, go over there and spit my shit
Told him to rap about what you know now every rhyme got a dick in it..
No one peeps Defiances verses and his skill aint forcing us
Yea we all sleep on em...They're damn sure soft enough!!
I can't believe it either, guy's gutsy with the spit that he's diffusin
Too bad in here, pussies get beat on more than bitches in prostitution!!
Whatever I'll drop first, we all know I'm a release hard..
Wile this punk only pulls a strap on a bitch when following leash laws!!
Got a million reasons why ur drop will suck and not ones hard to voice
But the idea of feeding off your verse would make an Ethiopian starve by choice!!

Re: Teflon Vs. Modern Defiance

Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 11:11 am
by eMCee Havic
Teflon, shit I’m fuckin scratchin the pan,
to prove your ineffective, at ever standin a chance

my cannons advance, while you be shootin pellets
I’m massaging bitches while you be lubin fellas

Teflon is proven jealous can’t handle my swag
i’m dark while he comes with candles attached

dismantle this fag, Teflon ya coats thinnin.. beatin me!
is just playin wit yourself like femdom wit no women

theres no winning, theres only losing for you
4 wins 5 loses, 6 is what you’re choosing to do

Proven a fool, Teflon the shit is getting sticky
This is a battle and your losses are shifting quickly

he’s getting pissy, tired of losin to his opponents
just a small piece of the puzzle, im the big component

its business homie, the jigs up, its game over
Teflon is left on the battle field still bein a lame poser


uppin 4 votes

Re: Teflon Vs. Modern Defiance

Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 3:54 pm
by ReCkinAll
TEFLON'S VERSE:

Modern cant beat me, this mans a fucking bitch
Sure he's Fly with punches...It's the Landings he struggles with!!
-NICE OPENER
Secondly fuck you, Modern check ur win record big zero like ur life
He wanted to battle me, so he can use my rhymes on another site!!
-NOT REALLY FEELIN IT
Means nothin to me, go over there and spit my shit
Told him to rap about what you know now every rhyme got a dick in it..
-NO
No one peeps Defiances verses and his skill aint forcing us
Yea we all sleep on em...They're damn sure soft enough!!
-NICE
I can't believe it either, guy's gutsy with the spit that he's diffusin
Too bad in here, pussies get beat on more than bitches in prostitution!!
-OK
Whatever I'll drop first, we all know I'm a release hard..
Wile this punk only pulls a strap on a bitch when following leash laws!!
-COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER
Got a million reasons why ur drop will suck and not ones hard to voice
But the idea of feeding off your verse would make an Ethiopian starve by choice!!
-NICE CLOSER
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MODERN DEFIANCE'S VERSE:

Teflon, shit I’m fuckin scratchin the pan,
to prove your ineffective, at ever standin a chance
-OK OPENER
my cannons advance, while you be shootin pellets
I’m massaging bitches while you be lubin fellas
-KINDA FUNNY BUT WTF
Teflon is proven jealous can’t handle my swag
i’m dark while he comes with candles attached
NOT REALLY FEELIN IT
dismantle this fag, Teflon ya coats thinnin.. beatin me!
is just playin wit yourself like femdom wit no women
-OK
theres no winning, theres only losing for you
4 wins 5 loses, 6 is what you’re choosing to do
-OK, BARELY THO
Proven a fool, Teflon the shit is getting sticky
This is a battle and your losses are shifting quickly
-NO
he’s getting pissy, tired of losin to his opponents
just a small piece of the puzzle, im the big component
-OK
its business homie, the jigs up, its game over
Teflon is left on the battle field still bein a lame poser
-KINDA WEAK CLOSER

THE BREAK DOWN:

personals-TEFLON
wordplay-TEFLON
punches-BOTH(TEF'S WAS HARDER)
flow-BOTH
metaphore-TEFLON
nameplay-BOTH


This battle was a decent one and i feel both did good. Teflon's verse was very direct and personal and flowed nice which in the long run got the edge in this battle. Mod's verse was decent also it just didn't challenge tef's this time around, i definitly wanna see a rematch fellas.....

V/TEFLON

Re: Teflon Vs. Modern Defiance

Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 4:20 pm
by eMCee Havic
1-0 teflon still uppin

Re: Teflon Vs. Modern Defiance

Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 2:37 am
by K KiLLaH
punches:teflon
everything else: tie

Brief: MD im suprised sum1 of ur skill didnt try for nameplay esp after teflon didnt anyways i think both of you slacked and didnt take each other seriously


vote:teflon

Re: Teflon Vs. Modern Defiance

Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 3:17 am
by eMCee Havic
lol, yeah true maybe we'll do a rematch

2-0 teflon

Re: Teflon Vs. Modern Defiance

Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 7:44 am
by Teflon
Haha word we can get something in the works in the future...For now tho 2-0 up.

Re: Teflon Vs. Modern Defiance

Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 10:21 am
by eMCee Havic
still uppin for a k.o. or more votes c'mon fellas

Re: Teflon Vs. Modern Defiance

Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 6:10 am
by MOEstradamus
Teflon
Modern cant beat me, this mans a fucking bitch
Sure he's Fly with punches...It's the Landings he struggles with!!
Good opener and decent punch 3/5
Secondly fuck you, Modern check ur win record big zero like ur life
He wanted to battle me, so he can use my rhymes on another site!!
Nice punch but kinda forced becuz it can't be proved 2/5
Means nothin to me, go over there and spit my shit
Told him to rap about what you know now every rhyme got a dick in it..
Good punch and follow up on last line 3/5
No one peeps Defiances verses and his skill aint forcing us
Yea we all sleep on em...They're damn sure soft enough!!
good punch but flow was off
I can't believe it either, guy's gutsy with the spit that he's diffusin
Too bad in here, pussies get beat on more than bitches in prostitution!!
another good punch but lacking flow kinda stretched
Whatever I'll drop first, we all know I'm a release hard..
Wile this punk only pulls a strap on a bitch when following leash laws!!
nice punch and went together 4/5
Got a million reasons why ur drop will suck and not ones hard to voice
But the idea of feeding off your verse would make an Ethiopian starve by choice!!
Great closer 5/5

Modern Defiance
Teflon, shit I’m fuckin scratchin the pan,
to prove your ineffective, at ever standin a chance
Wat??? 0/5
my cannons advance, while you be shootin pellets
I’m massaging bitches while you be lubin fellas
Nice try at a punch1/5
Teflon is proven jealous can’t handle my swag
i’m dark while he comes with candles attached
I don't know wat you did there but 1/5
dismantle this fag, Teflon ya coats thinnin.. beatin me!
is just playin wit yourself like femdom wit no women
not feelin your flow 1/5
theres no winning, theres only losing for you
4 wins 5 loses, 6 is what you’re choosing to do
a little punch just a little one2/5
Proven a fool, Teflon the shit is getting sticky
This is a battle and your losses are shifting quickly
started to flow there 3/5
he’s getting pissy, tired of losin to his opponents
just a small piece of the puzzle, im the big component
not feelin this either 1/5
its business homie, the jigs up, its game over
Teflon is left on the battle field still bein a lame poser
weak closer 1/5

ok Teflon i hope you were sleeping on this kid cuz you didn't really come hard you kinda coasted through this battle you got lucky and need to step it up..

Modern Defiance man you need to really organize your flow your really just not flowing good try writing to a beat maybe itll help smooth it out man



personals-Niether
wordplay-Teflon
punches-Teflon
flow-Teflon
metaphores-Niether really
nameplay-Niether
overall-Teflon

Re: Teflon Vs. Modern Defiance

Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:00 am
by Teflon
Lol ^^^ i got lucky but half my lines u liked quite a bit, but its cool my man and I don't sleep on neone done that before check my record ya know...Did this get updated by the way? win loss record?

Re: Teflon Vs. Modern Defiance

Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 8:49 am
by eMCee Havic
oh i got knocked the fuck out.... damn

Re: Teflon Vs. Modern Defiance

Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 1:57 pm
by Dead Silence
-Closed and Updated-