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Quix vs Reckinal

5 to 7 bars 10 to 14 lines
no biting, feeding or swaying, etc

don't take a week to post either!!

im here....

dont rush me!!

-- Thu Jun 04, 2009 1:03 pm --

Yo..

Im off my regulars now im on my jack harra/
with an attack that is..guarenteed to leave his raps splattered/

keep ya tracks gathered..and of course with no second thought/
just think wisely when steppin to this reckin force/
cause when its all said and done they'll be applause for all..except for yours/

There's no shame in tryin but if you tried trust you die in minutes/
your outsides would fry your soul would arise your FINISHED!/

and Im lyrically inclined to decline any thoughts that you process/
and straight up we know your gay ass still sleeps on the floor in the closet/
you cant find the handle to the door and they locked it/

but enuff nonsence just relize i bust them lyrics/
that will have ya own squad rush to hear it..
Come out your face and i'll turn your frame to a dust appearance/


-- Sat Jun 06, 2009 2:18 pm --

C'mon Quix Your suppose to be quik wit it...

Dont take a week to post your verse either

Aigh doggy! nice try!




I'm sorry Son, but you appear dumb, this bum the type tah Fear Gunz!
i'm a Bang yah top .. and have dah world see your insides lika a set of Clear drums
i refuse to Talk wid fam, instead Shots will land on his moms and pops in tens!
can't Stop this, Damn! i'm a have this faggot 'Swimming with the fishes' .. call him AquaMan!
I'm a shock his plans, have eat shit Out-a-bowl .. your a weak bitch Nothings full!
i'm Fuckin Cold! dah way i Have yah 'Shoulders popped back' like heath-cliff huxtable
you can't Beat Quix, you got no Pull! dah gunz are shown in Spurtz till your Slogans Hurt!
stop yah Flowing Jerk! before i 'tare yah top off' like Hulk Hogans Shirt

Easy!

LMAO....

VOTES PLS...

Aight I'm gonna break it down bar by bar...


Reckin:

Im off my regulars now im on my jack harra/
with an attack that is..guarenteed to leave his raps splattered/
*not the best opener ok tho*

keep ya tracks gathered..and of course with no second thought/
just think wisely when steppin to this reckin force/
*nah, no diss here ur just praising urself*

cause when its all said and done they'll be applause for all..except for yours/
There's no shame in tryin but if you tried trust you die in minutes/
your outsides would fry your soul would arise your FINISHED!/
*odd way to set up ur bars whatever tho just less punches more filler in my opinion...not feelin it tho*

and Im lyrically inclined to decline any thoughts that you process/
and straight up we know your gay ass still sleeps on the floor in the closet/
*nah played concept*
you cant find the handle to the door and they locked it/
but enuff nonsence just relize i bust them lyrics/
that will have ya own squad rush to hear it..
Come out your face and i'll turn your frame to a dust appearance/
*took four lines to get that, not feelin it man*

Reckin this is prolly the worst verse I've seen you drop too much filler not many punches none hard hitting...Opener was ur best and it was ehh..


Quix:

I'm sorry Son, but you appear dumb, this bum the type tah Fear Gunz!
i'm a Bang yah top .. and have dah world see your insides lika a set of Clear drums
*not bad concept, punch just didn't hit too hard for me*

i refuse to Talk wid fam, instead Shots will land on his moms and pops in tens!
can't Stop this, Damn! i'm a have this faggot 'Swimming with the fishes' .. call him AquaMan!
*haha idk why I laughed kind of simple, but not bad*

I'm a shock his plans, have eat shit Out-a-bowl .. your a weak bitch Nothings full!
i'm Fuckin Cold! dah way i Have yah 'Shoulders popped back' like heath-cliff huxtable
*decent punch here*

you can't Beat Quix, you got no Pull! dah gunz are shown in Spurtz till your Slogans Hurt!
stop yah Flowing Jerk! before i 'tare yah top off' like Hulk Hogans Shirt
*played concept, wasn't too bad tho*

Quix you came weak too man, but at least you threw more punches..Which is all that matters to me, might not have been great but overall better than Reckins..


Vote=Quix

OK OK 1-0...

-Replaced-
D.S.

multis- quix
metas-quix
flow- reckin
punches- quix
nameplay-reckin

Overall vote- Quix

reckinall you just didnt come hard enough. could of been better

2-0...

this shit is 2 funny....

AGREED ^^ it should easily be 5-0 by now!! smh!!







Funny as hell!! lol

check it

Flow:Quix (Structure was easy to read)
Wordplay:Tie
Punches:Reckinall (hit harder imo)
Multies:Quix (flowed better together)
entertainment:Quix (Simply enjoyed it more)

Vote:Quix

-- 12 Jun 2009 01:34 --

3-0
Quix

-Closed and Updated-