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Listen old man you got a program for hatin me/
no debate in need to see your skill shows no vacancy/
bright as hell you might as well think retirement/
take ya win record times a thousand then minus it/
thats what your equal to your audio gets damaged on the shelf/
im pumpin all liters with this either thats a HAZARD for ya heath/
this time around the one who raps worse was to act first..
now i'll rebel and then rush you/
your punchin with gloves on with nothin to touch on..
while watch mine have ya skeleton crush threw/

Alright pretty weak battle here...Hazard was feeling the first half your verse then it kinda fell off..

Reck you def came better than the last battle, but still not quite enough, threw more punches, but they just didn't hit hard enough...

Fav lines Hazard:

i'll Skeam Till Ur Studderin N Scream Like Theres Box Cutters In ya Spleen,..Ur The Buster In Ya Team..We Don't Compare, U Couldn't Match a Script Coordinatin Colors In a Scene
*Felt that, nice wordplay, creative*

Ima Knock This Fag Cold..& Kick Out Whatevers Livin In Da Drags Soul..Reck Suck's Like a Cash Tolll Theres Reasons He Don't Get Props,Aint Just Cus He'll Stuff Um In His Asshole..
*To me a played concept the props line, but it hit nice, opened up well*

Rest of the verse didn't care for much


Reck fav lines:

thats what your equal to your audio gets damaged on the shelf/
im pumpin all liters with this either thats a HAZARD for ya heath/
*played name line, but it was still nice one of ur better lines tho, decent personal..I was feeling the setup wish the punch was put together more creatively.

Listen old man you got a program for hatin me/
no debate in need to see your skill shows no vacancy/
*Felt ur opener, from that line def knew u were going to come better than last battle, but verse didn't live up entirely to it..


Alright listen Reck you def improved since even the last battle, I still feel one of the best verses I read from you was against me..And trust me I would love to vote for you against Haz haha but I can't...
Haz you didn't come that nice, but did enough to get the win (imo) punches hit harder overall better verse...Reck you threw
more punches now just make them land harder.

Vote: Hazard

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Votes!!!

reck after the hazard to urself punch you fell ooff u prolly coulda took the battle but slacked


multis hazard
flow reck
punches hazard barely
wordplay:hazard

everything else tie

vote hazard

both of yall was a lil hard to read ...

hazard, i know u was tryin to flip your bars
and i was tryin to keep up wit you, but i jus couldnt catch the flow on a lot of it ...
punches was, "ehhh", at best ...

reck, man, your flow was there, but you jus done missed tha short bus all together on this one ...
you start out sayin,
"Listen old man you got a program for hatin me/
no debate in need to see your skill shows no vacancy/" ...

well, if his "skill shows no vacancy" ... that means its full ..
that means HE FULL OF SKILL ...
so you slapped tha shit out yaself wit that one ..

then directly followed by,
"bright as hell you might as well think retirement/
take ya win record times a thousand then minus it/" ..

if he "bright as hell", why would he "think retirement" ?
and, "take ya win record times a thousand then minus it/" ..
MINUS IT MINUS WHAT ...just multiply it by 1000, then minus it ..???

nah, it dont pass tha smell test ...

weak ass battle to me, no disrespect, please ..

vote= HAZ

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