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LYRICS:

I SPEAK WITH LION'S TEETH, PRIDEFUL
CATCH AN EYEFUL OF THE RIFLE,
BARRELIN AT YOUR MIND'S SKULL
MY HEART'S SPITEFUL OF THE STREET TRIFFLES
'FRAID THE CYCLE WILL IMPAIR MY LIFE GOALS,
SO I LET GO....DREAMS DISAPPEAR BEHIND NIGHTMARES
MY EYES ARE PREPARED FOR WHAT THE NIGHT BARES
STILL MY SIGHT IS SCARCE, SEE'S NO TRUTH IN DARES
LET HELL BE UNVEILED N LIVE WITHOUT A DEVILS CARE
WITH AN OCTAVE FLARE, PUT YOU IN A COFFIN LAIR
PUT TWO TO YOUR LAPEL, COME AND COP A PAIR
MY POCKETS SELL, AIN'T NO LIFE DEALT WITH FAIR
NEVER KNELT FOR PRAYER,
PRAISED HEAT THAT'LL MELT YOUR LAYERS
METAL SPRAYER, FUCKIN VERBAL SLAYER
VOCALS LIKE A SWARM OF LOCUSTS
STRAIGHT DEVOUR MY OPPONENTS
WATCH ME SEIZE THIS MOMENT
CHOKE LIFE FROM SOULS REPENTED
SINS IN THROES OF ESSENCE
METAL TO CHESTS LIKE A PENDANT
THOUGHTS DEMENTED, DEATH PROGRESSIN THRU MY PRESENCE
TRYNA SEEK ITS VENGEANCE, A DEMON MENACE
FUCK REPENTANCE, TIL MY BREATH LESSENS
I'LL NEVER SPEAK A SENTENCE IN CONFESSION
MY SOUL'S BEEN MISDIRECTED BEEN REJECTED BY THE HEAVENS
NOW MY LIFE LESSON'S
TO BURN AT THE HAND OF GOD'S DISCRETION
RECIEVED THE DEVIL'S BLESSIN
TO RESURRECT N STAND CHEST TO CHEST WITH AGRESSION
I'MA RESURRECT N STAND CHEST TO CHEST
WITH MY WORD AS MY WEAPON....

this wasn't bad its got potential... lyrics were pretty dope i like the rhyme scheme... beat was kinda strange... u oughta make it into a full song... with a hook... good shit tho man

peace

this was aight at first i thought it was gonna be dope then u completely ran outta breath and it ruined the rest of the verse. lyrics were dope, first half flow and swagga was nice, like i said the rest fell off a bit