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Re: n anotha one!!
damm the multies was fire
the whole piece is dope
this has to be one of the best drops
i've ever read from you it needs to be longer
keep'em comin
the whole piece is dope
this has to be one of the best drops
i've ever read from you it needs to be longer
keep'em comin
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
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Re: n anotha one!!
yeah this shit was on point with the multies, but a standard verse is at least 16 bars, this came in at an uneven nine bars? which takes away from the authenticity of the shit for me, only crit' I can give, is just work on counting bars and learn the basic structure of a verse, but other than that, multies, flow, it was definitely ill in terms of all that shit, stay droppin' and stay elevating.
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