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you know i was gonna do it eventually
errbody wants to

anyway jus like real stupid punchlines

Lyrics:

Yeah Mutual
swagger what is that
i dunno but let me say this
UH HUH



i know no swagg i start like this
u always cleanched i aint talkin bout a tight fist
i could give u my lyrics u still couldnt write my ish
empty this dish salt on ya game now ya like fried fish
reality aint nothin like what it seems
keep u in stitches like the seam
i got a white flow call me the cream
best in the real world none less in my dream
call me omnipotent i'm everything on the rap scene
i'm the real messiah my messenger hakkeem
mayne i'm the fight fiend all of ya deemed
as haters until u got oldskool train an get steamed
raps my bolognaise makin all of ya pause
i feel like a pizza cheese comin from all my sauce
i got my dodo laced shoes glare at em i'm comin thru
i teach u how to rap a trainer call me shoe (haha)


damm i'm good


if u ignorin me better have the guts to say "he's hot"
if u not learnin u "better shoe" like nikes to reebok
i've had enough i'm #1 no one gotta swagger like mutual
but like a bad cold i keep u coughin/coffin like ya funeral
if u dont understand these puns you best had leave
or at lease branch out get it i'm makin jokes about a tree
really like dogs skin u gotta flea when all of you see me
sellin drugs G need to make bigger money i'm 2 after E
see i spit like this i jus spit thats it thats all
lyrics comeout u think mike vick........murda dawg
cham fans sayin haters shud all fry together
my fans are the same but say i am better
that aint a diss to king koopa the mixtape messiah
my lyrics like beverly hills celebrities yellin FIYAH


woah
damm

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any feed will be returned

Idk man Im srom the states i dont think itd appeal to my peers n I but it ight bump in the UK...the accent and flow was killing me

thanks fo the feed bumpin

honestly i think first and for most complexity should be slapped for lettin u post shit on here. i think i speak for us all when i say i now need to go bump some real shit jus to love hiphop again. dude, ur shit was so gay me and boy now have to smoke and drink jus to get back towards reality after u started a beef between us this shit was so god and satan aweful. ive been friends wit my boy for 15 yrs and this track single handedly made us start fightin. the alignment of the planets are now off due to this piece of shit waste of space considered a track so called wanna be music. T.I is sittin in prison slittin his wrist not even knowin this shit was over his beat, thank you u killed one of the greatest hiphop artist tracks (he would be proud of you, really he would) NOT!!!!!!!!!! dude ur so wack borat could out rap you!!!!


sorry to sound hateful but honestly give up and quit.... focus on servin ur queen and relax

~Symbolikull~ wrote:thank you u killed one of the greatest hiphop artist tracks

the song is terrible i've never heard anythin as bad as it well apart from this
anf FUCK THE QUEEN LIKE I CARE WHAT SHE THINKS

sym might be right like if ur new u could improve if not maybe you wont.... try freestyling every day until ur shit isnt choppy anymore

i jus couldnt quite get the flow on this
other beats i'm alot better on

well u have nice written work n graphics maybe u should drop audio n focus on those idk homie its up to you thats just my honest opinion hate it or luv it

I Say Niggahz Stop Hatin On The Kid .. Sure U Got Some Downers..
But U Can Improve Within Time Believe Me..
I Think People Need 2 Realize Everyone Starts Somewhere N Some People Dont Get That Jump Start
Anyways U Getta Thumbs Up 4 Effort..

this comin from the person who hates on everyone^^^

well i'm gonna keep tryin

Yeah Thats The Atittude You Gotta Have, Man. But Critcism Is, The flow is choppy bcause your lines are short (add more syllables). accent needs work (i got an accent so i feel you there). delievery is okay, but you might be tryin too hard.

i do try too hard try to get complex words n shyt
which is easy but then i sacrifice my flow
difficult but thanks fo the feed

lmao i never seen ghost shit on somebody like that

but yeah this was pretty bad, sounds like you didn't write the lyrics to the beat cause the flow was terrible, actually gave me a pretty good laugh cause of the accent shit just sounded weird

Yeah i Stomp On Corny Ass Dood's Like U Who Become a Lil 2 One With Their Ego ...

I Don't Try N Knock Down Dood's That Havent Got Themselves Up..