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House Cats

Due Next Week Friday(6/26/09)


*Ok Battle Fans If You Have Been Watching The BattleGrounds You Know Who Teflon Is And If You've Been Watching Them Lately You've Noticed -MenaCe- The New Jack Who Has Been Battling Opponents Left n Right Similiar To How Teflon Stepped On The Board. This One Should Consist of Raw Punchlines Battle Fans Strap Yourselves in Your Seats*

And Here We Go!


Its devistatin the statements that follow what this clowns chasin/
and fuck a scratch in fact i'll break you down to the foundation/
starvin for salvation and the only time he'll be "dope or "sick is if he's equiped to out patient/
underground is where your stayin constintly gettin stepped on the bets strong/
that the only way teflon'll blow up is wit a full stick stitched to his left arm!!/
and we'll see whos left to favor when im holdin the detonator/
cause the shit that you savior is worth piss it gets ripped quiker then wet paper/
no hard feelins to the remarks vearin your direction rapidly,well actually/
even if tha barz where color coded you couldn't focus on matchin me!!/
your rep falls to depths of concept for you to delirious/
even heated i'll speak it and ask why so serious got ya sick of hearin it/
cause your gonna swing for a win but this time you ain't comin close or near the shit!!/


Expo-Out Patient is a program for "dope" heads who are tryin to quit and when they do so they get "sick" as hell(you wont get it uless you kno wat im talkin bout)

No need to....


Yo don't even speak, my punches stay ownin you geek..
Fuck a triple stack, my hits'll have ya head rollin for weeks!! (ectsasy)
If you really think you're nice..that shit is alarming me
Hey if this faggot is vein...This is me slicing the artery!!
It's known that you're meek, so no way this ho's seein my shit
My verse's a bad dream, proving a good night don't even exist..
Just one of my verses will definitely smash this chump, kids
Because he would need to join a marching band for a chance to trump it!!
Menace can write a play by play on what NOT to do
Sure you go for glory, its just that failure keeps on stopping you!!
Battling noobs is sure amusin kid, I get them free hits in...
I'ma leave Menace played hard like fat kids with Wii Fitness!!
My dick is power, tell a chick to sprint to the crib at a midnight hour
The only response to your late night calls is "Try again during business hours"!!
Im'a have Menace begging for death, sort of like hells an escape
Alls I got to do is rage and connect, and he'll be laying shaking like Elvis's legs!!



Votes please...

Menace
Its devistatin the statements that follow what this clowns chasin/
and fuck a scratch in fact i'll break you down to the foundation/
starvin for salvation and the only time he'll be "dope or "sick is if he's equiped to out patient/
underground is where your stayin constintly gettin stepped on the bets strong/
that the only way teflon'll blow up is wit a full stick stitched to his left arm!!/
and we'll see whos left to favor when im holdin the detonator/
cause the shit that you savior is worth piss it gets ripped quiker then wet paper/
no hard feelins to the remarks vearin your direction rapidly,well actually/
even if tha barz where color coded you couldn't focus on matchin me!!/
your rep falls to depths of concept for you to delirious/
even heated i'll speak it and ask why so serious got ya sick of hearin it/
cause your gonna swing for a win but this time you ain't comin close or near the shit!!/


Teflon
Yo don't even speak, my punches stay ownin you geek..
Fuck a triple stack, my hits'll have ya head rollin for weeks!! (ectsasy)
If you really think you're nice..that shit is alarming me
Hey if this faggot is vein...This is me slicing the artery!!
It's known that you're meek, so no way this ho's seein my shit
My verse's a bad dream, proving a good night don't even exist..
Just one of my verses will definitely smash this chump, kids
Because he would need to join a marching band for a chance to trump it!!
Menace can write a play by play on what NOT to do
Sure you go for glory, its just that failure keeps on stopping you!!
Battling noobs is sure amusin kid, I get them free hits in...
I'ma leave Menace played hard like fat kids with Wii Fitness!!
My dick is power, tell a chick to sprint to the crib at a midnight hour
The only response to your late night calls is "Try again during business hours"!!
Im'a have Menace begging for death, sort of like hells an escape
Alls I got to do is rage and connect, and he'll be laying shaking like Elvis's legs!!

since dis suppost to be a tight battle ima add more cats and da person who takes da most of dem wins it for me

opener-Teflonhis had good creativity in it
flow-Menace got dis cuz his was smoother to me
punches-Menace took this one
personal-niether
nameplay-Menace took it cuz his flowed in his rap
creativity-Menaceyou both had some strong ones but den got weak but teflons got weaker
closer-Teflon he actually had a punch in it
4-2

Vote-Menace

opener-Menance
flow-Teflon
punches-Teflon
personal-Eh tied
nameplay-Menance
creativity-Teflon

Overall-
Teflon

Best battle i've seen in a while boys

TEFLON took this shit by a catsweep

vote = Teflon

opener- Tef..nice punch added to his concept..
punches-Tef..had more IMO
multi's-menace..was more consistent with it..
flow- menace..more consistent tefs flow started falling a bit near the business hours hit..
name/wordplay-menace
creativity-tie
enjoyment- Tef
Closer- Tef

good battle..Tef's verse had way more punches so i enjoyed it better...menace's flo's a lot better this time around..but battle was 16 lines and menace only wrote 12..i'm not penalizing him for it but it gave tef an advantage to be able to write 4 more lines...anyway my vote is for Tef..

nameplay-menace
flow-menace
personals-teflon
punches-tie
wordplay-tef
o/v enjoyment-teflon

vote- Teflon

4-1 TKO Teflon -Closed n Updated-