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Another Page in the Chapter

Post by eMCee Havic »

yo
yo

let me open the chapter, page 6-6-6
we're the dealer got flipped by sum witnesses
got clipped for having prosperous, buisnesses
drugs, pussy and all of that forbidden shit

sold coke to government officals, clerks and judicals
everything from drugs to missles, prostitutes an pistols
living large shinny cars, engraved wit his enitials
handing out cash to his fam not havin any issues
but livin through his ignorance he figured its all the same
if he can live the hussle, than its fortune an fame
made a couple of g's and let it go to his brain
than all his ambitions went straigt down the drain
and moved to a bigger game, started buyin kilos for 4 zeros
not even a lil bit fearful that the cops be gettin earfuls
his momma tearfull tells him "baby please stop!!!"
"people will be calling the cops" but he had his flock
callin non stop for 8 balls, and O's on the spot
and so he thought, maybe if he could get rid of it..
there'd be no evidence, for the prosecuter to present against
hopped in his ride set in text it should have been present then
but he hit the drop zone a spot shown to every cop known
met the connect, wit cash accepted cuz dudes want more
but what he did not know, that it was all on tape
even clearly saw his face, now the tails will alternate
to draw a place, where they could likey call it a day
so they lay an wait, an later bust through the door
"put your hands up or we'll bust you through the floor"
and there he was, face down and zip tied, an this time
they had the proof to let loose and, prosecute
serving 18 years so he lost his youth, an thats the truth
so never think your bullet proof in the persuit of loot
or your lose everything that you hold dear to you



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your flow in that rhyme was way better than anything youve done in a battle you should try and flow like that in the battle it was a fun read about sum real shit great job bro keep it up
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dope mayne
the beggining of the mayne verse
was fire greta opener dope flow with it
the multies waas dope best piece i've read from u
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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thanx mutual and MOE still uppin this beast
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uppn ill leave feed l8 on
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Good Shit Mod..

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Totally feeling this piece man.
"sold coke to government officals, clerks and judicals
everything from drugs to missles, prostitutes an pistols
living large shinny cars, engraved wit his enitials
handing out cash to his fam not havin any issues
but livin through his ignorance he figured its all the same
if he can live the hussle, than its fortune an fame
made a couple of g's and let it go to his brain
than all his ambitions went straigt down the drain "

Loved it man.
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