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Portapotty Origami

Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 4:31 am
by The Gonz
Ruckus is back, like a section of vertebrae/
Thought you slit my neck but all you left was a surface scrape/
If I heard you say that yer verse left a herb decayed/
Its safe to guess that I'm double checkin the murder rate/
Cuz some cats are blessed, but less than a third are great/
I'm destined to burn and slay til there's none left to impersonate/
Its a curse in ways, never drew a plan to be the sickest/
So when I spit to yall, its like Superman givin speeding tickets/
My frees are wicked, my writtens flowin with rage/
Surround you with solid bars like you were thrown in a cage/
Known for exposin you fakes like I opened the drapes/
I serve hot rhymes, read The Waiters, yer just holdin some plates/
The dopest display, expect nothing less from an artist/
Leave the coldest ablaze, cats check for resin to harvest/
Reflect on the carnage, somebody check for a pulse/
We all share the same hobby but mine has better results/

-- Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:48 am --

Cmon yall, quit sleeping on The Scriptures! There's more to hip-hop than text battles!

Re: Portapotty Origami

Posted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 4:51 am
by $harky
Once again your multis held the flow together well.
Alot of witty punches

liked this shit...

My frees are wicked, my writtens flowin with rage/
Surround you with solid bars like you were thrown in a cage/
Known for exposin you fakes like I opened the drapes/
I serve hot rhymes, read The Waiters, yer just holdin some plates/

ILL drop, keep up the pace.

Re: Portapotty Origami

Posted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 4:26 am
by EvilJoey
Nice bro
Gots ur poetic Flow / nice lil jabs in there... Great starting line too.

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Re: Portapotty Origami

Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:21 am
by K KiLLaH
uppin for the public i'll leave feed later

Re: Portapotty Origami

Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 7:19 am
by Def-init
Ayo, that was tight as hell bro. Nice work. I love the wordplay used in this piece. Keep'em coming Ruck.

Re: Portapotty Origami

Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 3:04 pm
by Phasewon
ill shit, as always, multies, flow, punches, everything
is on point, you already know...

"Cuz some cats are blessed, but less than a third are great/
I'm destined to burn and slay til there's none left to impersonate/"

^just one of the many sick lines in this shit, dope verse.

Re: Portapotty Origami

Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 10:54 pm
by -MenaCe-
Nice drop Ruckus....

9/10

Re: Portapotty Origami

Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 12:48 am
by - Mutual -
mayne this is dope stuff i gotta say i loved the flow the multies was fire i gotta say man this is the best piece i've read from yah but that maybe cus i dont read alot in the scriptures jus every now an again