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10 Lines....
House Cat Votes....
Verse Due:A.S.A.P....

And Here We Go!

I know i can take my time but im just gonna run threw this Cake Walk..
Why would i Face Off with a kid who couldn't Top Beef even if they where Steak Sause..
Couldn't stop me wit the Top Fleet and Shady on the 8th Floor..
Im like a magician when spittin inflictin shit to make this Punk Vanish..
Fuck nicotene i'll Hit Em' Wit A Scheme thats for sure to leave LunGzZ Damaged..
Why the fuck did you Find Us For cause the truth your gettin Closer Towards..
Is that you tried to jump ship and in fact just got Tossed Over Board..
Cause of Childs Play That you Find To Say Frequently..
got cha movin at the Least Of Speed..
Bottom Line is you belong around barz as much as retired strippers Need To Be..

Not At All!!

Menace

I own knives and blades that’ll have you blind in pain,
My punches got Men twirling around like the Pride parade!!
Shit you’d cry for days if my tool went BOOM,
When I put the metal to your face like fucking MF DOOM,
Now let’s move…Onto seriousness like ya’ sig budda
Been three bars and I got Men tore/mentor like a big brotha…
Ayo watch me kill this kid…Grab a gat and fill his lid,
Put an end to Menace faster then Mr.Wilson did! (pffft)
Take some pills you bitch, ya avatar is gay hard!
I’ll put this joker in a box, and I don’t play cards…PzZ

Uppin!!

opener-Menace..barely both were good punches..IMO menace edged this IMO i like the steak soss punch..
Punches-Lungz-had more solid punches
multi's-lungzz-had more simple..
flow-Tie-i followed both easily
closer-lungz..menaces punch just didn't develop enough..
enjoyment-lungz..some funny lines...

vote=Lungz

i enjoyed both of these versues i agree wit tre menace had the opener but man lungzz had some good ass punches and multis a couple things i didn't really like but i feel lungzz was more solid a cat sweep xcept for flow and opener

vote lungzz

2-0

2-0, thanks for the votes guys.

If you have any disputes I'm down Menace, say your piece, if you feel something wasn't done right voice your opinion. If someone voted against me without cats I would mention it, but thats who I am. If you know MOE, (I'm knew here so I haven't had enough time to judge peoples personalities)and know he's good on his word, then cool, I'm assuming he's a good guy. It's up to you man.


NO disrespect to MOE at all though, I appreciate the vote 100%

im a lil busy right now i can break it down more if you want to hold off my vote

M.O.E wrote:im a lil busy right now i can break it down more if you want to hold off my vote

I'm good with it man, it's up to him. His post of "Ok..." just led me to believe there was something wrong uno. And I want it to be fair for everyone, I don't want anyone to feel cheated; as I would expect the same.

No Its Cool Homie...

I Just Though This Was Gonna Be A Close One, Nice Drop..

-MenaCe- wrote:No Its Cool Homie...

I Just Though This Was Gonna Be A Close One, Nice Drop..

Same to you bro.

Menace ur getting better dude, ur punch lines still need better deliver but I see improv
ement pal, I think u kinda lose your flow and structure through out ur verse too so just keep on working on it and ull be a worthy adversary in no time.

Opener - menace
Punches - lungzz
Multis - tie
Personals - none
Wordplay - Menace
Nameplay - Lungzz
Closer - Lungzz

Enjoyment n overall vote - Lungzz

Decent battle I enjoyed the read

3-0 LungGzZ -Closed and Updated-