Hip Hop Forum

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i have a history of violence traveled to 9 islands
smoked and rolled eye lids never held a long silence
walk hundreds of miles in shell toes and worn "nikes"
drank bottles on a nightly bought things that be pricey
done drugs to delight me been a gemini wit a picese
had court judges deny me an lock me away behind bars
i've sat on a starless night wit the time to find stars
i've been through 5 cars trafficed ganj in nine jars
followed love with a blind heart an fell behind starts
lived a lot and loss a lot got cornered an tossed a cop
had thoughts to pause an stop got drunk an suaced a lot
had neignbors that called the cops jail can cost a lot
i've fucked an been fucked over never been stuck sober
a crazy youngin an young stoner still runnin amuck older
got in fights an sluged solgiers and i'm still not done yet
theres still other sunsets hot bitches to have dumb sex
there'll always be some shit and more rhymes to publish
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uppin

has a smooth flow to it
maybe not as lyrical as some of ya others
although is still is pretty good
nice multies here an there
over all smooth i likd it
keep'em comin

uppin

this is a decent drop IMO..liked most of the scheme...
some lines hit harder than otheres...but all in all
i felt some emotion in there...1

-- Wed Jul 01, 2009 9:46 am --

oyeah feed it when you can dude... http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/k9-diss-vt12781.html

flow fell off in the middle but i like the theme n rhymescheme

Word, Started Off Hard Then It Seemed Like You Fell Off A Little Bit But I Liked The Topical An Where You Was Going With It, Over All A Good Read, Keep droppin My Dude.

Nice Drop..

Im Feelin Tha Whole Thing!...