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aight it is what it is

ok ill pop it off with a quick 4 bars/
and have u and friends geekin for more like i cut it with inositol/phew!...

IM-SO-RAW!!! with just these 4 bars/
got u standin grippen the plate ichin for shake/

ill weave through and squeeze two/'like juice..."
but im aint tellin u to concentrate/

[quote="-MenaCe-"]Yo Fix Your Structure its all over the place.../
my bad people i had a dead begining and the responce was late/

pluse m.o.e's mother came over to check out my new place/
and i couldnt get my fly up fast enough to get back to the plate/

oops.. my bad its m.o.e vs -6BoNeS0- and ya mother wasent the case/
even though the real battle was with my cock in her face/


lol i had shit to do and i was in a rush, my bad get at me BLAOW!!!!

anybody higher rank then us can vote i guess

ill write 6 bars ill drop tonight i gotta work

-- Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:41 pm --

ok good luck

your a real rapper? shit... your faken-all-of-dis...
cuz im seein thru ya "bones" like radiologist//

also relateing-ta-this,the blood in ya mouth left a sicking-taste...
cuz ya punches missin-they-place and hittin-ya-face//

its like ya kissin-some-mace, da pains all ova-ya-skin...
your hits are forced in holes more then novolog-pens//*

in ya ass ya step dads roamin-within, so this bastards-beat...
smokin weed? no only in "halo" does he get "master-chiefs"//

beggin at the pastors-feet, so he wont have to do another underwear-dance...
big city neva getin a chance, cuz "bones" only big in da city underneath-france//**

thats right... you wont get to start toppin-spots...
cuz only time "bones" is mainstream... is when its watched-on-fox//***

*novolog pens are shots of insulin that diabetics take
**Catacombs of Paris: The Underworld.. is a underground bone city that is under france
***bones is a show on fox (for the UK ppl)

Punches - M.o.e
Wordplay - M.o.e
Multis - M.o.e i guess
Flow - Tie
Creativity - No1
Personals - No1

Vote - M.O.E

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ok ill pop it off with a quick 4 bars/
and have u and friends geekin for more like i cut it with inositol/phew!...

IM-SO-RAW!!! with just these 4 bars/
got u standin grippen the plate ichin for shake/

ill weave through and squeeze two/'like juice..."
but im aint tellin u to concentrate/

'[MenaCe)-Yo Fix Your Structure its all over the place..."
my bad people i had a dead begining and the responce was late/

pluse m.o.e's mother came over to check out my new place/
and i couldnt get my fly up fast enough to get back to the plate/

oops.. my bad its m.o.e vs -6BoNeS0- and ya mother wasent the case/
even though the real battle was with my cock in her face/


lol i had shit to do and i was in a rush, my bad get at me BLAOW!!!!

anybody higher rank then us can vote i guess[/quote][/quote]

-- Wed Jul 08, 2009 9:15 am --

and have u and friends geekin for more like i cut it with inositol/phew!..."insositol u cut coke with it"[quote="-6BoNeS0-"]

-- Wed Jul 08, 2009 9:26 am --

-- Wed Jul 08, 2009 9:15 am --

and have u and friends geekin for more like i cut it with inositol/phew!..."insositol u cut coke with it"[quote="-6BoNeS0-"]

-- Wed Jul 08, 2009 9:25 am --

IDK... It is what it is, i think he was kinda cheesy tho lol.

this sounds like it might need a round two because of the amount of time he had to read my verse and then write his flow but i respect everything to get it done... i always come harder, mind u this im really comin off the top with this no proof reading.....get at me


-6BoNeS0-

-- Wed Jul 08, 2009 9:28 am --

keep it goin.....

I Vote Moe

Bones Ya Bars Were Pretty Much Generic...

2-0

am i aloud to vote on this? he said higher rank...

go ahead

6's drop

ok ill pop it off with a quick 4 bars/
and have u and friends geekin for more like i cut it with inositol/phew!...
k um... cut what? the flow? um... not a punch... plus it seems sorta off, too many words

IM-SO-RAW!!! with just these 4 bars/
got u standin grippen the plate ichin for shake/
didn't rhyme i guess it goes that the next line but the structure is way off, and i don't really understand the punch either


ill weave through and squeeze two/'like juice..."
but im aint tellin u to concentrate/
bad structure, actual punch sort of... but sort of heard that alot b4


[quote="-MenaCe-"]Yo Fix Your Structure its all over the place.../
my bad people i had a dead begining and the responce was late/
was that a punch??


pluse m.o.e's mother came over to check out my new place/
and i couldnt get my fly up fast enough to get back to the plate/
lost again...


oops.. my bad its m.o.e vs -6BoNeS0- and ya mother wasent the case/
even though the real battle was with my cock in her face/

ok i see a punch but not so great...

Bro I gotta say I did not get most of this, need better structure and flow... and.. punch more its a battle not a cypha


Moe's drop


your a real rapper? shit... your faken-all-of-dis...
cuz im seein thru ya "bones" like radiologist//

now see if i was going to base flow off of how i think it should sound on a beat i'd say it was off but i realize you may have diff pauses or spit it different or whatever, anyways, decent punch

also relateing-ta-this,the blood in ya mouth left a sicking-taste...
cuz ya punches missin-they-place and hittin-ya-face//
Multies are definitely off syllables wise, if sicking taste and the missing/hitting ones were supposed to go.. but the punch is.. ok, its a punch


its like ya kissin-some-mace, da pains all ova-ya-skin...
your hits are forced in holes more then novolog-pens//*
okay punch, but meh
nice line for multies to lead from the previous bar though

in ya ass ya step dads roamin-within, so this bastards-beat...
smokin weed? no only in "halo" does he get "master-chiefs"//
Maybe its just me but i don't see how the halo line is a punch...


beggin at the pastors-feet, so he wont have to do another underwear-dance...
big city neva getin a chance, cuz "bones" only big in da city underneath-france//**
pretty nice punch, sucky multi if you were trying for it... (underwear/underneath... nah...)

thats right... you wont get to start toppin-spots...
cuz only time "bones" is mainstream... is when its watched-on-fox//***

again mutli off but pretty decent punch


Punches here were decent, multies and flow weren't too great, word play was ok... it was over ok.. but just.. ok...


OVERALL VOTE- For actually having punches at least, would have to go to MOE, neither was spectacular but he beat out bones no doubt

lmao.... u r serious aight do whateva...

6's drop

ok ill pop it off with a quick 4 bars/
and have u and friends geekin for more like i cut it with inositol/phew!...
k um... cut what? the flow? um... not a punch... plus it seems sorta off, too many words


i can tell u never tuched coke lame.... ne ways keep it goin lol

-6BoNeS0- wrote:lmao.... u r serious aight do whateva...

6's drop

ok ill pop it off with a quick 4 bars/
and have u and friends geekin for more like i cut it with inositol/phew!...
k um... cut what? the flow? um... not a punch... plus it seems sorta off, too many words


i can tell u never tuched coke lame.... ne ways keep it goin lol

k sorry for free posting but no, i haven't touched coke b/c i'm smart enough to keep myself off drugs, nor do a sell it cuz i don't kill my people. Also, I know what inositol is but you are cutting what??? the bars, the flow? what are you cutting... you didn't state it was him... it was not a punch. Please don't throw hate at me, i do detailed votes to help folks out not bring em down, learn from it and move on.

sorry didnt mean to hurt ur feeling my virginic friend but yes i meant it as him and yes if u think about it it was and if u cant take what i think of what anyone posts sign out and stay out nothing personal ya dig peace...

sceritz wrote:

-6BoNeS0- wrote:lmao.... u r serious aight do whateva...

6's drop

ok ill pop it off with a quick 4 bars/
and have u and friends geekin for more like i cut it with inositol/phew!...
k um... cut what? the flow? um... not a punch... plus it seems sorta off, too many words


i can tell u never tuched coke lame.... ne ways keep it goin lol

k sorry for free posting but no, i haven't touched coke b/c i'm smart enough to keep myself off drugs, nor do a sell it cuz i don't kill my people. Also, I know what inositol is but you are cutting what??? the bars, the flow? what are you cutting... you didn't state it was him... it was not a punch. Please don't throw hate at me, i do detailed votes to help folks out not bring em down, learn from it and move on.

-- Thu Jul 09, 2009 6:41 pm --

3-0 i won good battle

3-0 KO -Closed and Updated-