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This is my song "Life is a Test" This is for thoses that not into fast rap really. this is my life so it aint really about a curtain thing. im just sharin my story

Im Feelin this one...

You told your story very well..

Good Shyt Homie..

yeah for sure homie great song.. flow waS ON point. delivery was off in some points. but the lyrics and the beat made up for that.
tight man

hook is not bad not real memorable though, flow and delivery are pretty on point for the most part, theirs some awkward pausing and parts where you trail off but they're pretty minor, you got a slight speach impediment (or you're mexican they seem to have a weird vocal inflection when they speach english that sounds similar) you seem to avoid it at times in the verses if you could manage to minimize it you'd be alot doper cause thats the only thing that really annoyed me about this track

Hit this track up with some feed if you could.. Appreciated