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Ghost= the soul of a dead person, a disembodied spirit imagined, usually as a vague, shadowy or evanescent form, as wandering among or haunting living persons
Geist= spirit, spirituality; also, intellectual inclination, intelligence

(womans voice)

"Where is he?"
"he's gone!!"
"no body has seen him?"
"Where would he Go?"
"hopefully he comes back!!"

Verse:
look,
im a phantom's incantation i've been back waiting
stuck in the print i'm placing my slim chance fading
souls dwindlin like a dim lamp's patience
this is my ghastly hand at reach as i stand beseeched
the vague shadow demands to speak in the land of peace
or haunt the livin in a damned defeat
as i wallow a disembodied geist mad at those who lobby life
disfugured my bodies diced from where the shotty sliced
anger growing so now my hobby's fright
scarin the living out at night makin all doubt their sight
as i wait an count then strike so never doubt my strife
i'm making non believers doubt they right
makin hair stand on end never been a man of friends
a ghost geist wit a grand offence banned from the land of men
cursed intellegence that commands ya sense


just some shit i'm workin on, uppin for some feed

Nice Shit!!

The Whole thing was perfect, i give this 10/10 eazy!..

shit is looking ill homie, of course the multies
were on point, flow on point, as well as delivering
deep subject matter but still managing to make it
lyrical and sticking to your roots as an mc.

"as i wait an count then strike so never doubt my strife
i'm making non believers doubt they right"

^that shit was dope, simple, yet effective and worded nice...
good shit

thanks guys still uppin