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heres the full version of it

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Lyrics:


im hell bound for 12 rounds the hell hound
golden flow i meld sounds till the melt down
felt grounds shake and shiver quake and quiver
you'll learn quick not to break n play wit sinners
whose ace is quicker as I proceed to cut the deck
get much respect a razor tongue ta cut ya flesh
I must object cuz my path is that of fallen angels
its all entangled but with skills I'm often able
to cause tornados with a force to wreck ur home
im fresh and prone specially when the tech is shown
the best that’s known aint got shit on me the swift emcee
burnin to the 5th degree makin a mark on history
but you pissed at me cause you could never compare
the clever conveyer of words to sever you there
I never am scared always prepared for verbal combat
I'll serve your contacts while I'm mergin complex
theories in an urban context here to seize

i let my pencil speak for me as i breathe my weed
i couldn’t picture, picturing myself not be-ing me
as i flee the scene high off flaring dopamine’s
the dopest deemed as an outlaw but you know its clean
i was smokin green before the new age was goin green
im so obscene parents should shield their children
the lyrical villain with more rep than Sicilians
i strike out on civilians at any moment or time
the main component this time when i focus my crime
the dopest wit rhymes is back for his moment in time


i bidded to be top of my game defiance's the name
and riots my aim diamonds engrained defilin the game
and i am the same as those who try an refrain
i rise in the flames bitches ll die for the name

doin backfilps with this rap shit
didnt you see my last trick with a brain as thick
as this you'd also be a savage rhythm addict
in the attic writin a passage an poppin acid tablets
can you imagine,

it cant be grasped or held as the facts ll tell
a master tells none of his secrets even the meekist
he keeps it close to his chest engraved in his flesh
for I hasten your death and get ta breakin ya neck
i made it the best now pay me respect



(Rest is freestyled)


uppin for some feed on my Shizz

if you wouldnt have posted the lyrics would have been hard to hear what you were trying to say.. im not a big freestyle fan but you came wit it. it seemed like you went freestyle and then tried to say something and then jumped back to freestyle. overall good work..
~~Deciple~~

I Thought It Was Okay, I Found Myself Reading The Lyrics The Second Time I Listened To It. It Was Hard For Me To Grasp The Main Concept, It Seemed Pretty General, You Were On Beat, The Only Thing That Was A Real Problem To Me Was Almost Throughout The Whole Track, Your Backups Are Overpowering Your Verse Until You Get To The Freestyle Part, Overall With A Little Tweaks It Could Be A Decent Track.

I was feelin this one it had some nice wordplay i felt the mastering is alittle off i cant really hear you that loud and clear but what i did hear was nice...

Good shit..

uppin for some more feed

aight beats nice..yeah i like the flo for the most part though
you got a soft delivery style..i cant understand what ya sayin..
i like the backups but their too loud..
2nd verse ya slipped a bit and the verse right before the freestyle but it's an easy fix..

all in all this was aight..but could be a good song with some adjustments..keep doin a thing..

beats nice (eminem beat obviously) this wasn't bad hard to hear after u free'd it... it wasn't bad kinda got annoying with the repeating shit after ur verse... fell off alot during the freestyle... shoulda wrote the rest of it out... but it was cool and like kurse said it is good to see u droppin audios than droppin texts so keep this up u'll be pretty sick with the audios...