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4 bars due 24 hours from check

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opener-
punches-
nameplay/wordplay-
multis-
flow-
entertainment-
closer-

check

check lol uppin.....

2 hours and ill be done cya den

fa sho dirty gotta make some runs but ill stay loged in aight im lookin for a good rematch make it tuff.....one!

ok I gotta question?????

How can cutty fix-em when hes already fucking-shot???*
I want flesh wen im fishen, i ditch "bones" lika sushi-shop//

I'll leave dis pussy-popped, cuz I hate foul-writas...
he couldn't "bang" on my turf if he was fuckin alquida//**

I down-fightas and stoppin-ya-act, wit no final-trap...
dis kid couldn't put shots-n-my-back, if he was givin me a spinal-tap//

now wrapped in my vinal-rap, you wanted a rematch so try-now-play-hard...
but my punches will "uplift bones" like another chi-town-graveyard//***

*he goes by cutty fixem
http://i444.photobucket.com/albums/qq16 ... /Cutty.png
**alquida is a terrorist group
***in chicago a graveyard was digging up bones and throwing them in the woods to re sale the lots and caskets
http://chicagoist.com/2009/07/09/over_1 ... sellin.php

-- Fri Jul 24, 2009 11:41 am --

always makin me wait

-- Fri Jul 24, 2009 11:42 am --

lol you got hour and a half bro hurry up

-- Fri Jul 24, 2009 12:41 pm --

yo???

YAH, hes duckin mah battle tooo doggy!

lol

-- Fri Jul 24, 2009 2:33 pm --

dude???

-- Fri Jul 24, 2009 2:34 pm --

ok he missed the first due i think that means i go up one vote then if he doesn't drop by tomorrow i go up two

1-0 me

-- Fri Jul 24, 2009 2:36 pm --

The deadline is usually decided by the battlers. For every day a battler is late for the deadline, a vote is added against him. For example, if the deadline has passed and you haven't posted your verse for 3 days then the score would be 3-0 against you and you will loose the battle.

if you don't believe me

-- Sat Jul 25, 2009 3:55 pm --

2-0 me

-- Sun Jul 26, 2009 10:19 pm --

3-0 three days late ko this kid and update

-- Mon Jul 27, 2009 6:09 pm --

fuck it if he drop before its closed then do it man i don't care

im goin through some shit right now homie and im not around the computer as much ill drop tomarrow aight look out for me no bullshit just got back into the crib when i got kicked out aight ........'RESPECTS?'

ok well drop when you can i was tryna rush you wit that o well just drop when you get da chance

ok m.o.e money over everythang..so then u still a virgin/
never hit the hairy thang, u wanna bang? texcee battle style?/

i gets da money... u jack off to girls gone wild/
yeah i peeped ya syle, u spit quick and off beat/

not even hill billy chick can keep up in tha sheets/
shes says ya shits weak.... along with ya swag u fags/

is like tha rest with no life livin off halo thats why bust/
shots at u lames cause dis dick isnt ment for you a-holes/ one!!!!


tuff talk wit no walk get at me!!!!!............

wite girls dancing off beat
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EmopgiFUomE

need i say more?????????????? i can come harder play boy.... vote up pimps

HATERS HATE, BUT THEY KNOW IM HARD WAIT TILL I DROP AUDIO BATTLES THEN ULL REALLY FEEL MY FLOW

Punches-M.O.E
Multie's-Tie(Both Weak)
Creativity-M.O.E
Nameplay-M.O.E
Wordplay-Neither
Consistancy-M.O.E
Flow-M.O.E
Enjoyment-M.O.E


This One is basically a cat sweep for M.O.E just because he delivered a more experienced verse he actually made clear and direct when on the other hand bones has the potential you just need to make your barz come together better, this battle was weak tho..


V/M.O.E

damn i pretty much agree with Menace on this one...

MOE u had a hell of a 4 bar verse... came strong... only thing is multis were kinda weak at points...

Bones... dude... seriously??? u sounded like me when i first started textcee'in WHACK!!!! i mean wtf...

"i gets da money... u jack off to girls gone wild/"

wtf does money have to do with Girls Gone Wild??? only reason they'd be put together in a sentence would be "i bought Girls Gone Wild with my own MONEY" its not an effective diss or punch... not even a good opener...

ur verse was just whack dude... hot garbage... up ya fuckin game man come on...

Punches-M.O.E
Multie's-N/A, double ups arent multiz
Creativity-M.O.E
Nameplay-M.O.E
Wordplay-N/A
Consistancy-M.O.E
Flow-M.O.E
Enjoyment-N/A

This battle was weak, but moe had the better verse, as depressing as it is to say that, its true.

3-0 close it up