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Nocturnal Genacide

light bright but dark can send a evil bark
evilish calls send chills down ya apartment hall
cuz when darkness falls its a enormous loss
braken felony laws for a misdemeanor cause
though you had it all somethin important to do in a matter of time
i slash ya thigh with a mask gone past my eyes
drag ya ass to my jaguar 2009
truck empty till i put five guys inside
drive to da nearest pharmacy to cop some paraphale- ya
im on a mission and i really wont fail ya
pop dem things eye wide like a road-ster
trip to heaven you can't get much closer
especially when ya tied up with electrial wiring
its tiring sqeeze till theres no more tightening
they say i cause frightenin sights and then
im the sin dat some cant repent it enlightin

Chorus: evil calls at night time or early morin
every day a body is gettin mourin then
a killer still has a killin mind
call it nocturnal genacide

Verse 2:
cant believe i killed a taxpaying eldery man
i admit it was bad so popped 12 acid tabs
i crack a laugh enraged at my girlfriend last
12:00 i'll be there in a like hour and a half
i shower and bath think about the crazy task
should i wear a cape or should i wear a fuckin jason mask
or should i chase her ass naked down the nature path
a maniac would take a bat a cock back and take a crack
1:30 and im feelin dirty
forget to take a shower cuz i was rushed in a hurry
now i barely ready to slice and dice cuz the chainsaw is heavy
put it back in trunk hurry grip da machete
she opens da door with a bathrob and earring
not knowin in a minute that she'll be hurtin
lay her on the bed and fake prepare for sex
duct taped up wit a hatchet cuttin flesh please dont bleed to death

Chorus: evil calls at night time or early morin
every day a body is gettin mourin then
a killer still has a killin mind
call it nocturnal genacide

verse:3
homicide cruisin give ya fuckin neck peice a bruisin
worst than contusions leave you permantely not movin
2:01 am and my mind is in another state
state of hate makes my fatal outcomes perform great
a scented fragance that im sprayin on the interior
spray some in the trunk were i was hostagly keepin ya
im creepin up on a little cunt named vivica
middle name a-lesa but i wasnt keepin up
2:30 and im thinkin bout actually keepin her
then dream of a life with this biggy titty c-cup
i think up a way to break her down solftly
maybe let her feel my new cars soft seats
i often just murder without a lot sed
but we exchange conversation on my mattress
i dont kill her but its 3:am
and my nocturnal genacide is about to begin

so wat did you do this beat too? and man you used simple rhyming not many multis but that could be your style until i know the beat i can't really tell if ur off flow but you do need to spell check cuz you put a infront of like so it said a like nstead of like a then you left out some words but let me know the beat then ill continue

hmm it would probably be better if you could drop an audio for it...i'd like to hear it cuz some spots in the flow seem off..
but it could just be the way you swag your verses... drop an
audio for this so i can give better feed..

I Wanna Hear the song..

Drop a Link.

as soon as i find a instrumental for the song im goin drop the finished version of it.. and i agree that it has simple rhymes usually not my style but i wrote this last year

iight..

drop some recent shit.