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My flows' dirty like I'm pourin out a mop bucket/
I got punches but my hands do the talkin like a sock puppet/
Stop frontin, Ruckus you don't drop nothin/
Yet these skeptics check my resume like I'm job huntin/
Every verse is perfected til I'm heard and respected/
Its worth the investment, my word's a murderous weapon/
Vets hurtin and stressin til they curse their reflection/
Hatred turns to a question then converts to obsession/
Then they purchase collections and buy hits, they can't deny it/
This man's a riot, I never cut a track I samurai it/
My sword's raw, leave biters with a sore jaw/
Thru the ups and downs, I got more support than a sports bra/
Yall picked the short straw, all the haters quit boastin/
Cuz their flow is the toilet water my latest shit floats in/
Flush it down, clowns can try again another day/
Tryin to be raw but you aint hard enough to make the rubber break/

W AH that Shyt is Str8 Fyre

Damn

this was great man pure fire bro

My flows' dirty like I'm pourin out a mop bucket/
I got punches but my hands do the talkin like a sock puppet/

one of my favorite lines

Yall picked the short straw, all the haters quit boastin/
Cuz their flow is the toilet water my latest shit floats in/

another one

keep dem coming man we need more shit like dis no homo

The punches were raw.

The flow was good.

The rhyme scheme was very average.

Overall. I liked this piece because it kept me entertained and it didn't try to be something it wasn't.

dope shit, as usual, multies, flow, punches,
everything was executed nicely. started to fall
off a lil at the end, but nonetheless still a
solid lyrical verse, ill drop.

I like the flow, it had basic vocab but it was good, had me laughin, epsecially the sock puppet, that was funny as fuck. I'd work on makin ya lines a little longer and better vocab, but it was nice, woulda been a nice corner cipher spit

Good Shyt Ruck...

10/10 the whole piece was nice..

shit was straight fire..
rolld right off the tounge..
thanks 4 the drop.

Up this shit