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This Is A Pretty Recent Track I Did Featuring Tre Tru, I Was Thinkin Of Using This For My Solo Album Once I Get The Mixing Dialed In Perfectly, But Here's A Rough Cut Of The Track....I'll Be Back In A Bit To Feed Tracks I Haven't Heard Yet, Peace

I Made This Beat With Reason 4.0
And All Recording And Production In Cubase sx3...If Anyone Was Wondering.

Hook, 1st & 2nd Verse's - Petrafyne

3rd Verse - Tre Tru
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This shyt is ok..

alittle to slow for me...

Not bad tho..

damm its slow and its soft like gummy bear....some bow wow thing or slow version of bone thugs n harmony

-- Mon Aug 17, 2009 11:14 am --

actualy its sound like nely....

Thanks Menace, Yeah I Agree But This Track Was Supposed To Be On A Deeper Level And Thats The Vibe I Was Goin For, Again Thank You.

P.T.R-ins wrote:damm its slow and its soft like gummy bear....some bow wow thing or slow version of bone thugs n harmony

actualy its sound like nely....

Thanks For Bumpin Up My Shit...At Least I Sound Like Somebody That's Made Something For Them Selfs. Nice With The Comparisons Even Though I Think I Don't Sound Like Any Of Them.

if the lyrics matched i would us this to smoke to lmao i like slow style like this sumtims but to me not with this concept plus ur hook coulda been fix cuz u get flowin then you kinda force the flow near the end which kills it for me.... lyrics aren't bad nothin that makes me lol or go damn but i don't think u were tryn... another thing sometimes i really cant hear u cuz ur voice gets lower then the beat and kinda low emotion..... beat was sick....

beat 8/10
hook 6/10
lyrics 6/10
delivery 7/10

total 6.75/10

didnt mean to share offenses ....my respect for any1 who trys n do smfing....just its not typ of track i would put on my play list..thats all...i bet that girls likes it lol..peace

I liked this flow and style.. but the beat was screaming to me that you need to throw a little bit of faster pase. If you dont mind you think i can get this instrumental and throw a verse on it? if you like it maybe make a remix with You, Tru Tre and Myself.. But i just got an amazing idea and i just want you to hear it.
This song over all tho im really feel'n it. keep it up guys

Thanks For The Feed, I Know Illest Has A Tough Crowd But It Is What It Is, I Aint Goin Explain Shit What This Song Is About Obviously Everyone Thinks Their An Expert. I Never Drop Masters Online And Yeah Girls Love My Shit, All Of It.

you sound good on it, it is slow though, you might wanna go back and do a colab with some people on it might take a hit in the slowness cause the beats ok nice job though keep droppin