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house rules not less then 5bars till end of the day

-- Mon Aug 17, 2009 11:34 am --

dont spit in cap that you can not fill/
remove that *ee* from ZeeZ boy n go to sleep/
only bball track youll get is 1 you try to skip/
you like Jay-Z?am gona leave you in blue prints/
he think he is PLEYA,leavin signature like JOKER/
man..
you not a PLEYA when you are played more than game of poker/
what ever script you pull my rep will stay IN-TACT/
my new ADIDAS on feet will give to your ass the FRESH IMPACT/
if i kill you in the church i still would not be a sinner/
you are reject of this thread so am goin out like winner////end

exp:remove from zeez ee n you get zz thats 4 sleep,fresh impact is deodorant from adidas line..bla,bla i think youl understand rest lol

good job nice verse what u want for lunch-this-cookie
fuck around & follow your name and Punch-This-Rookie

similar to satan when flamin i'll leave your verse cajan
this battle will get so crazy moderators yell please stop the tapin

you need to step up your bars serious, the rhymes u spit out ya throat sad
i'll dip ur tooth in ur blood to write my verse & use ur flesh as my notepad

that last bar was weak so please voters just make ammend
but i figure why throw a punch when ptr wont try to defend

its like a battle already won against dis worthless bum
fuck this whole battle just give me my win im done

cat sweep to zeezy um i DONT need to explain cuz everyone will agree... cut ptr u where weak

i dont know ... i would like to get more of explanation ...i know that am whack lol so tell me smfing that i dont know....oh no disrespecting lmao

dont spit in cap that you can not fill/
remove that *ee* from ZeeZ boy n go to sleep/
you had a solid concept here and good try at name play but non of ur words rhymed
only bball track youll get is 1 you try to skip/
you like Jay-Z?am gona leave you in blue prints/
when was he tryna be jay z maybe more like slaughter house cuz dats at least his avatar so this weak punch has no meaning at all in it
he think he is PLEYA,leavin signature like JOKER/
man..
you not a PLEYA when you are played more than game of poker/
your words are twisted and they did not flow the flow here was forced man try and proof read ur shit so you can get da flow goin
what ever script you pull my rep will stay IN-TACT/
my new ADIDAS on feet will give to your ass the FRESH IMPACT/
your best line and it wasn't that great i mean the multi was weak but you tryed id give you a 2/5 for this bar and flow was forced here to
if i kill you in the church i still would not be a sinner/
you are reject of this thread so am goin out like winner////end
again man u are missing words and it makes ur flow look like a cavemen wrote it

give you 6/25 and thats ur whole verse tip write to a beat so ur flow is down and say da beat u wrote to also... then proof read proof read proof read man u are missing words everywhere


good job nice verse what u want for lunch-this-cookie
fuck around & follow your name and Punch-This-Rookie
nice name play flow was decent 3/5
similar to satan when flamin i'll leave your verse cajan
this battle will get so crazy moderators yell please stop the tapin
didn't really make since and it is kinda played 1/5

you need to step up your bars serious, the rhymes u spit out ya throat sad
i'll dip ur tooth in ur blood to write my verse & use ur flesh as my notepad
decent but not really a punch 2/5
that last bar was weak so please voters just make ammend
but i figure why throw a punch when ptr wont try to defend
lol this was a good bar playen off your last one but still weak 2/5
its like a battle already won against dis worthless bum
fuck this whole battle just give me my win im done
ok filler to the max 1/5

total-9/25 didn't really have many punches but you had flow and that alone won it for you

vote zeezy316

punches-Zeezy
multi's-Zeezy
nameplay-Zeezy
creativity-neither
personals-Zeezy
enjoyment-Zeezy
flow-Zeezy

CATSWEEP! Yo P.T.R you really need to elevate or get the F*ck off tha site on the real cause with a style and lyrics like that you'll just turn out bein "everybodys" bitch.




v.ZeeZy316

first zeezys profile say he like jay z i pulled that from ther,my flow is ok just you cant get it ...thats coz you listenin 50cent to much...tho for punches you to mugs are proably rite ..that be it...

-- Tue Aug 18, 2009 12:15 am --

when there is two whack verses in 1 thread is dificult to spam a winer lolmao

lol yea ur right i listen to 50 cent all the time lmao ok lets see how many ppl say u got good flow lmao

punches-Zeezy
multi's-Zeezy
nameplay-Zeezy
creativity-neither
personals-Zeezy
enjoyment-Zeezy
flow-Zeezy

Overall: Zeezy

It wasn't even a close battle. Zeezy had the guy from bar one. My favorite line in the battle was the first punch from Zeezy.

actualy that 1st line of zeezy is the best in this whole*battle*...he had nameplay,some low multiie n punch/i will have to work it out hehehe...K.O for316

Pardon me ya'll.... this is the worst battle I've ever read/seen/heard of...if there was some way to be recouped for the 40 seconds it took out my life to read it, I would send both of u a bill...zeezy u are absolutely the worst I've ever seen....& P.T.R. u come a close second, but u don't seem to take yourself seriously..so it don't matter...oh wait...if I don't vote I'm guessing this would be deemed a freepost....since both verses were equally bad....its a tie...that is all...

LMFAO..............nuff said, hahahaaaaaaa

-Closed n Updated- 3-0 KO goes to Zeezy