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leave the rap,coz 4 ever you will stay wanabe,
like intelligence you have is Melted On Ecstasy(M.O.E)//
you couldnt pull a punch if you hold the boxing-glove-leash,
but you can earn the lunch like renting-blow-bitch//
try to lose your self in some other thing,
verses that you make are Most Obvious Embarrassing//
your flow is whack,you flowing like an axe,
stop hoping you will never drop something on the wax//

alright check ill drop ina few

-- Mon Aug 17, 2009 2:08 pm --

i wouldn't let you play-my-track, cuz you even said urself ur straight-up-wack...
break this fake-in-half, and give u my biography and u couldn't say-one-fact//

ill leave this gay-intact, cuz he'll be on my rhymes like da other meth-addicts...
and his wins couldn't "add up" like subtracting mathmatics//

rappin kid im fast-at-it, and u don't want war just surrender-ya-fuck...
he must be a "escort" cuz i don't know anyone else who can "deliver"-and-"suck"//*

he'll pull a daffy n duck, dis kid is fucked lika dick-in-his-head...
he couldn't put his words to his meanings if da dictionary did-wat-he-said//**


*ecorts are legal hookers that will show up to your house and do wat you want so its a delivery that sucks ya dick lmao and he talks big but his delivered raps suck get it
** his rhymes make no sense sometimes so he couldn't get words to mean wat he wants if the dictionary did wat he said get it

vote up

-- Mon Aug 17, 2009 2:12 pm --

on the first line

here the thing he said

dont know ... i would like to get more of explanation ...i know that am whack lol so tell me smfing that i dont know....oh no disrespecting lmao

its in the battle with him and zeezy i had to go find it lol

punches-Moe
wordplay-neither
multi's-Moe
nameplay-P.T.R
creativity-P.T.R
enjoyment-Moe
flow-Tie

P had the nameplay down but the punches just weren't there.Moe you need to get aliitle more complex homie and that Ecstasy line would have hurt ya if the set up was right...


V. M.O.E

lol i wrote it in 40 mins i kinda slept on him

look like you had erection in that 40 mins now shut up n let peps vote

punches-Moe
multi's-Moe
nameplay-P.T.R
creativity-MOE
enjoyment-Moe
flow-MOE

Moe has more experience and simply dominated this battle.

Overall: MOE

2-0 vote up

moe of course nuff said chesck the between me and him also the same 40min battle but i made it in 10 lol idk this guy is horriable i think but it is what it is...RESPECTS

3-0 close dis

well i guess this one doesn't need a vote..
it would've been for moe on this one anyway...1

plz close this

3-0 KO -Closed n Updated-