SacredVerse vs Def-Init ( Def-Init wins by TKO)

[SacredVerse]

Topical Battle
Unlimited Bars
Topic: "Demonic"

Voting Structure:

Verse A Comments

Verse B Comments

What Tipped Ya Vote

This is my check, verses due 72 after Def checks...

Goodluck!

-- Thu Aug 20, 2009 7:58 pm --

Guess he doesn't want to battle anymore... Anyone take his place?

[Def-init]

Im checkin in.

-- Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:24 pm --


"Demonic"



Verse #1
Forged off an offspring of 'Kain', I came.
To set ablaze the early days, quick and cryptic
I sit now, caged, amongst the screams.
Hellfire it seems awaits my dreams!
I can feel the flame's lick
My eyes bleed of black,
while a body breeds
hatred and bacterial plaque!
A dark demoness and wolf pack, disgusted,
controlling the vastness, unchallenged!
I wonder what part I play
in this spiritual rebirth
While echoes of dark acts
perpetrate beneath earth.
Wasted are the ancient ways and knowledge of broken lands
An eternity of existence upon barren wastelands.
Can I withstand passage through desert?
On alert, hit the dirt, evil converts.
I stand in the doorway of light and dark.
Panoramic sight, my trademark.
Insert, quotation mark.
Slaves, picking an Egyptian cotton bloom.
The cold air and phonetic transcription
in their long forgotten tomb
makes it impossible to see through rotten fumes
I'm losing what remains of my humanity
Insanity it seems is my relief from vanity
and the brief belief in grief that is Christianity.


Verse #2
The righteous soul,
shall fall before the wicked.
Beneath an influence of the yawning abyss,
corrupting a mind already filled with sickness!
surrounding crimson sight,
scars of this world shine bright,
In the depths of night, in putrid primal periods
actual acid and battles of blood
lead rancid rabid reptiles against shaded spectras, spectrally.
An array of entities illuminate incantations of an evil one
and are composed of screams, verbs and nouns in foreign tongue.
I foresee rows of nails, blades stained in filth,
another chapel with a wind-chill factor!
Herein lies the pitchfork and pigskin
another cut of pork from an identical twin
while God's freewill is manipulated in sin.
Like Hitler in Berlin,
the atrocities decreed to humanity
Can’t be seen till your earthly end.
So I write the demonic symphony of sympathy
endlessly to thee that can’t conceive life vividly.
Furious stakes and metaphysics don’t escape me.
A flawless masterpiece of mistakes,
Elevate your mental state, meditate.
cause stem cell research...is a truly merciful fate.

[-MenaCe-]

Bump!

[SacredVerse]

Shit, my bad, forgot all about this, gimme 24 on this, I've been outta state for a week and haven't been able to drop...

[Def-init]

Ayo, Sacred are you shook or what? Gonna drop your verses or not?

[SacredVerse]

Sorry, I keep having work out of state, I'll drop right now:

I patrol with demons, giants, massive Heathens
Scheming to raze the roof with dragons Heaving
Pillars of flame through the wizards and Genius
Rip out they lungs.. sever and feed em they Penis
Rape and slay, then sleep with the women Screaming
Gasping and tweaking while I cream em wit Semen
I'm sicker than ever, thrust with heavy Breathing
Love it when they hide, but if they run I Beat Em
Slap and skeet em, carve em on bread, devour and Eat Em
The masses hate me, I know, but I'll make em Mad Again
Throat slit the Pope, then creep and slash up his Paladin
Warp to the future, drop back, and squeeze the Cal Again
Snatch the cross from a corpse and rock a new Talisman
Face the forces of good, and maul through All of Them!

Sorry it took so long!

[Def-init]

Hrmmm. I think you are missing a verse.
Verse A
Verse B

But this topical battle has been here awhile so lets just get some votes on it.

[-MenaCe-]

Not Droppin a vote until SV drop's another verse by tomorrow night..

[SacredVerse]

Thats not what I meant by Verse A and Verse B, I meant his Verse/My Verse, I was trying to depersonalize it, but whatever

I delve through tomes covered by flesh and Skin
Trying to unlock heads shrunk like morbid Africans
So I snatch a chin, creep back and slash through Men
I need an arm now, and maybe a couple Knees for Later
Making real soldiers intent to breeze through the Haters
Cleave through the fakers, because my words weave Wizardry
My foes see me skin flakin, they think they need to Pity Me
Til my spells rain corpses down over all they Cities, G!
I am a lich, the epitome of arcane inspired vile Abilities
Now I got the clergy searching for me, hoping to Merk Me
Hurt me, leave me maimed and desert Me
But I go back to my philactory, mist up and have em Mad at Me
Nuttin but skin and bones, so they hire my peoples to Get At Me
Not knownin they schemin to decease the Pious
Blaze they bosses, toss em, and feed em to Fires
So ease back, watch out for the ire in my Iris
Cuz the only song of God I sing is the song of Silence

[Def-init]

Bump!

[P.T.R-ins]

I patrol with demons, giants, massive Heathens
Scheming to raze the roof with dragons Heaving
Pillars of flame through the wizards and Genius
Rip out they lungs.. sever and feed em they Penis
Rape and slay, then sleep with the women Screaming
Gasping and tweaking while I cream em wit Semen
I'm sicker than ever, thrust with heavy Breathing
Love it when they hide, but if they run I Beat Em
Slap and skeet em, carve em on bread, devour and Eat Em
The masses hate me, I know, but I'll make em Mad Again
Throat slit the Pope, then creep and slash up his Paladin
Warp to the future, drop back, and squeeze the Cal Again
Snatch the cross from a corpse and rock a new Talisman
Face the forces of good, and maul through All of Them!

v2

I delve through tomes covered by flesh and Skin
Trying to unlock heads shrunk like morbid Africans
So I snatch a chin, creep back and slash through Men
I need an arm now, and maybe a couple Knees for Later
Making real soldiers intent to breeze through the Haters
Cleave through the fakers, because my words weave Wizardry
My foes see me skin flakin, they think they need to Pity Me
Til my spells rain corpses down over all they Cities, G!
I am a lich, the epitome of arcane inspired vile Abilities
Now I got the clergy searching for me, hoping to Merk Me
Hurt me, leave me maimed and desert Me
But I go back to my philactory, mist up and have em Mad at Me
Nuttin but skin and bones, so they hire my peoples to Get At Me
Not knownin they schemin to decease the Pious
Blaze they bosses, toss em, and feed em to Fires
So ease back, watch out for the ire in my Iris
Cuz the only song of God I sing is the song of Silence

-- Tue Sep 15, 2009 4:08 am --

man.....SV..what was this?

Trying to unlock heads shrunk like morbid Africans

and this

Rip out they lungs.. sever and feed em they Penis
Rape and slay, then sleep with the women Screaming
Gasping and tweaking while I cream em wit Semen
I'm sicker than ever, thrust with heavy Breathing
Love it when they hide, but if they run I Beat Em
Slap and skeet em, carve em on bread, devour and Eat Em

that was more ...cant find word.... blah it was retarded and half of your things don't rhyme in any kind of concepts...
and ....shit it is whack... that slang words like G, MURK ME ..etc dont go wit this....


and DEfinit had TWO verses that was talking about topic that you gave.....dont know how to judge this !!!SV missed concept totaly...
vote For DEFinit

[SacredVerse]

It will be 0-1 Uppin once this faggot follows the voting structure!

And just so your faggot ass knows, I was going with the ritualistic side of demonic, and unlike half the fucks on this site, I never peeped my opponent's verse before I dropped to make mine better, AND I wasn't the one who picked the topic. But its ok, your parents adopted and hate you anyways, fuckboy!

[-MenaCe-]

Def-init:


Verse #1
Forged off an offspring of 'Kain', I came.
To set ablaze the early days, quick and cryptic
I sit now, caged, amongst the screams.
Hellfire it seems awaits my dreams!
I can feel the flame's lick
My eyes bleed of black,
while a body breeds
hatred and bacterial plaque!
A dark demoness and wolf pack, disgusted,
controlling the vastness, unchallenged!
I wonder what part I play
in this spiritual rebirth
While echoes of dark acts
perpetrate beneath earth.
Wasted are the ancient ways and knowledge of broken lands
An eternity of existence upon barren wastelands.
Can I withstand passage through desert?
On alert, hit the dirt, evil converts.
I stand in the doorway of light and dark.
Panoramic sight, my trademark.
Insert, quotation mark.
Slaves, picking an Egyptian cotton bloom.
The cold air and phonetic transcription
in their long forgotten tomb
makes it impossible to see through rotten fumes
I'm losing what remains of my humanity
Insanity it seems is my relief from vanity
and the brief belief in grief that is Christianity.

-Nice, on topic.35/50


Verse #2
The righteous soul,
shall fall before the wicked.
Beneath an influence of the yawning abyss,
corrupting a mind already filled with sickness!
surrounding crimson sight,
scars of this world shine bright,
In the depths of night, in putrid primal periods
actual acid and battles of blood
lead rancid rabid reptiles against shaded spectras, spectrally.
An array of entities illuminate incantations of an evil one
and are composed of screams, verbs and nouns in foreign tongue.
I foresee rows of nails, blades stained in filth,
another chapel with a wind-chill factor!
Herein lies the pitchfork and pigskin
another cut of pork from an identical twin
while God's freewill is manipulated in sin.
Like Hitler in Berlin,
the atrocities decreed to humanity
Can’t be seen till your earthly end.
So I write the demonic symphony of sympathy
endlessly to thee that can’t conceive life vividly.
Furious stakes and metaphysics don’t escape me.
A flawless masterpiece of mistakes,
Elevate your mental state, meditate.
cause stem cell research...is a truly merciful fate.

-Feelin It, stayed on topic nicely.46/50
Overall:81/100



Sacredverse:


I patrol with demons, giants, massive Heathens
Scheming to raze the roof with dragons Heaving
Pillars of flame through the wizards and Genius
Rip out they lungs.. sever and feed em they Penis
Rape and slay, then sleep with the women Screaming
Gasping and tweaking while I cream em wit Semen
I'm sicker than ever, thrust with heavy Breathing
Love it when they hide, but if they run I Beat Em
Slap and skeet em, carve em on bread, devour and Eat Em
The masses hate me, I know, but I'll make em Mad Again
Throat slit the Pope, then creep and slash up his Paladin
Warp to the future, drop back, and squeeze the Cal Again
Snatch the cross from a corpse and rock a new Talisman
Face the forces of good, and maul through All of Them!

-Wordplay is sick and you stayed on point i feel, flow was nice...45/50



I delve through tomes covered by flesh and Skin
Trying to unlock heads shrunk like morbid Africans
So I snatch a chin, creep back and slash through Men
I need an arm now, and maybe a couple Knees for Later
Making real soldiers intent to breeze through the Haters
Cleave through the fakers, because my words weave Wizardry
My foes see me skin flakin, they think they need to Pity Me
Til my spells rain corpses down over all they Cities, G!
I am a lich, the epitome of arcane inspired vile Abilities
Now I got the clergy searching for me, hoping to Merk Me
Hurt me, leave me maimed and desert Me
But I go back to my philactory, mist up and have em Mad at Me
Nuttin but skin and bones, so they hire my peoples to Get At Me
Not knownin they schemin to decease the Pious
Blaze they bosses, toss em, and feed em to Fires
So ease back, watch out for the ire in my Iris
Cuz the only song of God I sing is the song of Silence

-Alittle weaker then your 1st verse but still decent and your flow is perfect, stayed on toppic. 40/50
Overall:85/100




This battle was a good one for the way it was set up and both came decent and stayed on topic i dunno wat ptr is talkin bout with sv cause i totally felt he came alittle better and his flow made his verse an easy read and the wordplay was nice, def came nice but just missed the win by a couple points, literally..



V/SacredVerse

[SacredVerse]

Going to be 1-1 when Penis Taken Rectally adds why (besides the stupid off topic) Def got his vote.

[P.T.R-ins]

shit head just take a critic .....


Def-Init

Forged off an offspring of 'Kain', I came.
To set ablaze the early days, quick and cryptic
I sit now, caged, amongst the screams.
Hellfire it seems awaits my dreams!
I can feel the flame's lick
My eyes bleed of black,
while a body breeds
hatred and bacterial plaque!
A dark demoness and wolf pack, disgusted,
controlling the vastness, unchallenged!
I wonder what part I play
in this spiritual rebirth
While echoes of dark acts
perpetrate beneath earth.
Wasted are the ancient ways and knowledge of broken lands
An eternity of existence upon barren wastelands.
Can I withstand passage through desert?
On alert, hit the dirt, evil converts.
I stand in the doorway of light and dark.
Panoramic sight, my trademark.
Insert, quotation mark.
Slaves, picking an Egyptian cotton bloom.
The cold air and phonetic transcription
in their long forgotten tomb
makes it impossible to see through rotten fumes
I'm losing what remains of my humanity
Insanity it seems is my relief from vanity
and the brief belief in grief that is Christianity.


The righteous soul,
shall fall before the wicked.
Beneath an influence of the yawning abyss,
corrupting a mind already filled with sickness!
surrounding crimson sight,
scars of this world shine bright,
In the depths of night, in putrid primal periods
actual acid and battles of blood
lead rancid rabid reptiles against shaded spectras, spectrally.
An array of entities illuminate incantations of an evil one
and are composed of screams, verbs and nouns in foreign tongue.
I foresee rows of nails, blades stained in filth,
another chapel with a wind-chill factor!
Herein lies the pitchfork and pigskin
another cut of pork from an identical twin
while God's freewill is manipulated in sin.
Like Hitler in Berlin,
the atrocities decreed to humanity
Can’t be seen till your earthly end.
So I write the demonic symphony of sympathy
endlessly to thee that can’t conceive life vividly.
Furious stakes and metaphysics don’t escape me.
A flawless masterpiece of mistakes,
Elevate your mental state, meditate.
cause stem cell research...is a truly merciful fate.

this verses totally goes with topic,have a better rhyming scheme n i could feel it

-- Thu Sep 17, 2009 11:21 am --

and this odd lyrics created by Stans Worshiper


I patrol with demons, giants, massive Heathens
Scheming to raze the roof with dragons Heaving
Pillars of flame through the wizards and Genius
Rip out they lungs.. sever and feed em they Penis
Rape and slay, then sleep with the women Screaming
Gasping and tweaking while I cream em wit Semen
I'm sicker than ever, thrust with heavy Breathing
Love it when they hide, but if they run I Beat Em
Slap and skeet em, carve em on bread, devour and Eat Em
The masses hate me, I know, but I'll make em Mad Again
Throat slit the Pope, then creep and slash up his Paladin
Warp to the future, drop back, and squeeze the Cal Again
Snatch the cross from a corpse and rock a new Talisman
Face the forces of good, and maul through All of Them!

v2

I delve through tomes covered by flesh and Skin
Trying to unlock heads shrunk like morbid Africans
So I snatch a chin, creep back and slash through Men
I need an arm now, and maybe a couple Knees for Later
Making real soldiers intent to breeze through the Haters
Cleave through the fakers, because my words weave Wizardry
My foes see me skin flakin, they think they need to Pity Me
Til my spells rain corpses down over all they Cities, G!
I am a lich, the epitome of arcane inspired vile Abilities
Now I got the clergy searching for me, hoping to Merk Me
Hurt me, leave me maimed and desert Me
But I go back to my philactory, mist up and have em Mad at Me
Nuttin but skin and bones, so they hire my peoples to Get At Me
Not knownin they schemin to decease the Pious
Blaze they bosses, toss em, and feed em to Fires
So ease back, watch out for the ire in my Iris
Cuz the only song of God I sing is the song of Silence


have all sings that points that you should visit psychiatrist (and am tellin you again chopin someones genitals aint demonic its idiotic especially when you say that you squiz out seamen n cream them) ....tho your second vers is better then your first verse...but again like i said you fall of the topic its more like you creating Frankenstein...
thats my point of view
so my vote goes to definit....