MenaCe vs Dynamiq
Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 10:28 am
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MenaCe vs Dynamiq
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Re: MenaCe vs Dynamiq
Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 10:38 am
Re: MenaCe vs Dynamiq
Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:24 am
Yo i'll drop on Monday. I got some shit goin on this weekend. Koo?
Re: MenaCe vs Dynamiq
Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 8:43 am
No problem Monday it is
-- 30 Aug 2009 05:47 --
now i know you didnt just tell me im known for no showing and i show up and u bitch out?
come on man drop already if u need extra time say so.
-- 30 Aug 2009 05:47 --
now i know you didnt just tell me im known for no showing and i show up and u bitch out?
come on man drop already if u need extra time say so.
Re: MenaCe vs Dynamiq
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 3:41 am
Listen!
This guy's whole perspective and net record is a lie all fiction with No Facts to be Told..
Say you will but..Actually Won't! And if your the king well this means i'll be quik to slit the Majesty's Throat!!..
Sit and watch while you Rapidly Fold screamin and pleadin While ya career Falls at Amazin Speeds..
No chance to save face and leave! So basically Imma reck this ho shit is been etched in stone like Masonry!!..
No erasin me sry son but the time as come for you say goodbye and Walk the Green Mile..
I spit hot he barely Speaks Mild not rugged or raw i'll leave em stuffed in a draw like Police Files!!..
My punches hit joel venom heavy like soaked denom are you sure you wanna Cross this Young'n?..
I go full force when huntin! You winnin this event is happenin like mikes Tour in London!!..
This guy's whole perspective and net record is a lie all fiction with No Facts to be Told..
Say you will but..Actually Won't! And if your the king well this means i'll be quik to slit the Majesty's Throat!!..
Sit and watch while you Rapidly Fold screamin and pleadin While ya career Falls at Amazin Speeds..
No chance to save face and leave! So basically Imma reck this ho shit is been etched in stone like Masonry!!..
No erasin me sry son but the time as come for you say goodbye and Walk the Green Mile..
I spit hot he barely Speaks Mild not rugged or raw i'll leave em stuffed in a draw like Police Files!!..
My punches hit joel venom heavy like soaked denom are you sure you wanna Cross this Young'n?..
I go full force when huntin! You winnin this event is happenin like mikes Tour in London!!..
Re: MenaCe vs Dynamiq
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 9:37 am
will drop tonight.
decent verse.
decent verse.
Re: MenaCe vs Dynamiq
Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 2:04 pm
wat happened to dis?
Re: MenaCe vs Dynamiq
Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:20 pm
Your Antics Pester Who's Bent On Hype..!
Meaning The Only Way 'Yule Put Up A Fair Fight' - Is If 'Germanic Festivals Went On Strike!
And..
Honestly..Ya Rhymes Suck - But I Enjoy How Cats Laugh At Em'
Cuz M Wouldnt Be 'Intense With Bars' - As 'A Boy Scout Rap Battling!'
Sheesh..
What A Bad Tragic End.. It Doesnt Take Much To Prove Ya A Dumbfounded Fool!
So While I Yawn,Lounge In School..We'll see if 'Municipal Owen'.. Out The 'Almshouses Poole'!
Pshh.. Wordplay = Menace A Pull A Win
Being Truthful..Illest Is Making Up This Fools Fate!
So Hows His Slates Enough To Boost Rates? When Dude wouldnt 'Move in For The kill'..If Jason Was His Roomate!'
*DEAD*
Votes Up Meaning The Only Way 'Yule Put Up A Fair Fight' - Is If 'Germanic Festivals Went On Strike!
And..
Honestly..Ya Rhymes Suck - But I Enjoy How Cats Laugh At Em'
Cuz M Wouldnt Be 'Intense With Bars' - As 'A Boy Scout Rap Battling!'
Sheesh..What A Bad Tragic End.. It Doesnt Take Much To Prove Ya A Dumbfounded Fool!
So While I Yawn,Lounge In School..We'll see if 'Municipal Owen'.. Out The 'Almshouses Poole'!
Pshh.. Wordplay = Menace A Pull A WinBeing Truthful..Illest Is Making Up This Fools Fate!
So Hows His Slates Enough To Boost Rates? When Dude wouldnt 'Move in For The kill'..If Jason Was His Roomate!'
*DEAD*
Re: MenaCe vs Dynamiq
Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:25 am
Uppin Votes!!!!
Re: MenaCe vs Dynamiq
Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:45 pm
vote up.
-- 06 Sep 2009 06:10 --
vote god damnit!
-- 10 Sep 2009 07:12 --
vote up already wtf?
-- 06 Sep 2009 06:10 --
vote god damnit!
-- 10 Sep 2009 07:12 --
vote up already wtf?
Re: MenaCe vs Dynamiq
Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 3:52 am
To be honest...I wasn't very impressed by either verse. But broken down, I will say that Menace's drop was structured alot better. Just have to watch your spelling becuz I think there's a few things in that verse that you might've meant to say, but didn't get the right impact across becuz of the fact that you put something else accidently. (not everyone may catch it as they run through it...but I did. Not a huge deal...but could effect you in the long run.)
You always wanna leave with a BANG...so your closing bar has gotta go hard! Dynamiq's closing bar completely shut down Menace's when compared to eachother. That whole "not moving in for the kill, even if Jason was his room mate" line cracked me up. Good closer.
...I was also impressed by Dy's "Municipal Owen" word play. It seems slightly stretched, but due to the complexity of it, I'd say it still gives an impact compared to Menace's lack of word-play in his drop.
Overall vote: Dynamiq
Good battles guys. Good luck on your remaining votes.
You always wanna leave with a BANG...so your closing bar has gotta go hard! Dynamiq's closing bar completely shut down Menace's when compared to eachother. That whole "not moving in for the kill, even if Jason was his room mate" line cracked me up. Good closer.
...I was also impressed by Dy's "Municipal Owen" word play. It seems slightly stretched, but due to the complexity of it, I'd say it still gives an impact compared to Menace's lack of word-play in his drop.
Overall vote: Dynamiq
Good battles guys. Good luck on your remaining votes.
Re: MenaCe vs Dynamiq
Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 4:12 am
This guy's whole perspective and net record is a lie all fiction with No Facts to be Told..
Say you will but..Actually Won't! And if your the king well this means i'll be quik to slit the Majesty's Throat!!..
a nice flow good on the multies nice finish 9/10
Sit and watch while you Rapidly Fold screamin and pleadin While ya career Falls at Amazin Speeds..
No chance to save face and leave! So basically Imma reck this ho shit is been etched in stone like Masonry!!..
multi a little off but still got that flow an a not bad impact 8/10
No erasin me sry son but the time as come for you say goodbye and Walk the Green Mile..
I spit hot he barely Speaks Mild not rugged or raw i'll leave em stuffed in a draw like Police Files!!..
OoO i liked the impact on this nice punch a dig at police coulda been alot better tho 9/10
My punches hit joel venom heavy like soaked denom are you sure you wanna Cross this Young'n?..
I go full force when huntin! You winnin this event is happenin like mikes Tour in London!!..
not really great cus the rhymin was off an not a very good finisher i'm afraid 5/10
total - 31/30
______________________________________________________________________
Your Antics Pester Who's Bent On Hype..!
Meaning The Only Way 'Yule Put Up A Fair Fight' - Is If 'Germanic Festivals Went On Strike!
OoO nice opener good multies kept on flow 9/10
Honestly..Ya Rhymes Suck - But I Enjoy How Cats Laugh At Em'
Cuz M Wouldnt Be 'Intense With Bars' - As 'A Boy Scout Rap Battling!'
owh nice this bar was dope straight up 9/10
What A Bad Tragic End.. It Doesnt Take Much To Prove Ya A Dumbfounded Fool!
So While I Yawn,Lounge In School..We'll see if 'Municipal Owen'.. Out The 'Almshouses Poole'!
dunno this was quite complex but flow was off slightly 8/10
Being Truthful..Illest Is Making Up This Fools Fate!
So Hows His Slates Enough To Boost Rates? When Dude wouldnt 'Move in For The kill'..If Jason Was His Roomate!'
nice closing bar good impact but not great 8/10
total - 34/40
nice battle my vote goes to Dynamiq
Say you will but..Actually Won't! And if your the king well this means i'll be quik to slit the Majesty's Throat!!..
a nice flow good on the multies nice finish 9/10
Sit and watch while you Rapidly Fold screamin and pleadin While ya career Falls at Amazin Speeds..
No chance to save face and leave! So basically Imma reck this ho shit is been etched in stone like Masonry!!..
multi a little off but still got that flow an a not bad impact 8/10
No erasin me sry son but the time as come for you say goodbye and Walk the Green Mile..
I spit hot he barely Speaks Mild not rugged or raw i'll leave em stuffed in a draw like Police Files!!..
OoO i liked the impact on this nice punch a dig at police coulda been alot better tho 9/10
My punches hit joel venom heavy like soaked denom are you sure you wanna Cross this Young'n?..
I go full force when huntin! You winnin this event is happenin like mikes Tour in London!!..
not really great cus the rhymin was off an not a very good finisher i'm afraid 5/10
total - 31/30
______________________________________________________________________
Your Antics Pester Who's Bent On Hype..!
Meaning The Only Way 'Yule Put Up A Fair Fight' - Is If 'Germanic Festivals Went On Strike!
OoO nice opener good multies kept on flow 9/10
Honestly..Ya Rhymes Suck - But I Enjoy How Cats Laugh At Em'
Cuz M Wouldnt Be 'Intense With Bars' - As 'A Boy Scout Rap Battling!'
owh nice this bar was dope straight up 9/10
What A Bad Tragic End.. It Doesnt Take Much To Prove Ya A Dumbfounded Fool!
So While I Yawn,Lounge In School..We'll see if 'Municipal Owen'.. Out The 'Almshouses Poole'!
dunno this was quite complex but flow was off slightly 8/10
Being Truthful..Illest Is Making Up This Fools Fate!
So Hows His Slates Enough To Boost Rates? When Dude wouldnt 'Move in For The kill'..If Jason Was His Roomate!'
nice closing bar good impact but not great 8/10
total - 34/40
nice battle my vote goes to Dynamiq
Re: MenaCe vs Dynamiq
Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 9:05 am
wow.....2-0 Uppin
Re: MenaCe vs Dynamiq
Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:11 pm
thanks for the vote. uppin for more votes.
Re: MenaCe vs Dynamiq
Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:12 pm
Your Antics Pester Who's Bent On Hype..!
Meaning The Only Way 'Yule Put Up A Fair Fight' - Is If 'Germanic Festivals Went On Strike!
nice all around bar no personal tho but still a 8/10
And..
Honestly..Ya Rhymes Suck - But I Enjoy How Cats Laugh At Em'
Cuz M Wouldnt Be 'Intense With Bars' - As 'A Boy Scout Rap Battling!'
another really good bar but nothin that made me go o shiiiit 8/10
Sheesh..
What A Bad Tragic End.. It Doesnt Take Much To Prove Ya A Dumbfounded Fool!
So While I Yawn,Lounge In School..We'll see if 'Municipal Owen'.. Out The 'Almshouses Poole'!
another good bar and kinda lost flow a little so 8/10
Pshh.. Wordplay = Menace A Pull A Win
Being Truthful..Illest Is Making Up This Fools Fate!
So Hows His Slates Enough To Boost Rates? When Dude wouldnt 'Move in For The kill'..If Jason Was His Roomate!'
great closer man good shit but not the best ive seen but better than menaces 8/10
Great verse man i like this one better than your verse against cee4 great shit. nothing that stuck out and made me go omg but still a very consistent verse good shit total 32/40
This guy's whole perspective and net record is a lie all fiction with No Facts to be Told..
Say you will but..Actually Won't! And if your the king well this means i'll be quik to slit the Majesty's Throat!!..
liked this bar good multis flow nice lil punch 8/10
Sit and watch while you Rapidly Fold screamin and pleadin While ya career Falls at Amazin Speeds..
No chance to save face and leave! So basically Imma reck this ho shit is been etched in stone like Masonry!!..
good shit nice punch nothin special tho 8/10
No erasin me sry son but the time as come for you say goodbye and Walk the Green Mile..
I spit hot he barely Speaks Mild not rugged or raw i'll leave em stuffed in a draw like Police Files!!..
loved this bar nice punch and flow 9/10
My punches hit joel venom heavy like soaked denom are you sure you wanna Cross this Young'n?..
I go full force when huntin! You winnin this event is happenin like mikes Tour in London!!..
liked this but your closer was a lil weak 7/10
ok great vesre but ur filler at the bottom killed it man. total 32/40 ok so ill go to cats
1:opener-Menace
1:closer-joel
2:flow-menace he never lost it and joel u lost it a lil on ur third bar
3:multis-tie
4:punches-id say a tie menace had harder ones in my eyes but his last line fell off which ment joels consistent ones caught up so ima say tie here
5:personals-niether really
Menace-10
joel-8
vote-menace great shit both of you id love to see a rematch maybe even an audio
Meaning The Only Way 'Yule Put Up A Fair Fight' - Is If 'Germanic Festivals Went On Strike!
nice all around bar no personal tho but still a 8/10
And..
Honestly..Ya Rhymes Suck - But I Enjoy How Cats Laugh At Em'
Cuz M Wouldnt Be 'Intense With Bars' - As 'A Boy Scout Rap Battling!'
another really good bar but nothin that made me go o shiiiit 8/10
Sheesh..
What A Bad Tragic End.. It Doesnt Take Much To Prove Ya A Dumbfounded Fool!
So While I Yawn,Lounge In School..We'll see if 'Municipal Owen'.. Out The 'Almshouses Poole'!
another good bar and kinda lost flow a little so 8/10
Pshh.. Wordplay = Menace A Pull A Win
Being Truthful..Illest Is Making Up This Fools Fate!
So Hows His Slates Enough To Boost Rates? When Dude wouldnt 'Move in For The kill'..If Jason Was His Roomate!'
great closer man good shit but not the best ive seen but better than menaces 8/10
Great verse man i like this one better than your verse against cee4 great shit. nothing that stuck out and made me go omg but still a very consistent verse good shit total 32/40
This guy's whole perspective and net record is a lie all fiction with No Facts to be Told..
Say you will but..Actually Won't! And if your the king well this means i'll be quik to slit the Majesty's Throat!!..
liked this bar good multis flow nice lil punch 8/10
Sit and watch while you Rapidly Fold screamin and pleadin While ya career Falls at Amazin Speeds..
No chance to save face and leave! So basically Imma reck this ho shit is been etched in stone like Masonry!!..
good shit nice punch nothin special tho 8/10
No erasin me sry son but the time as come for you say goodbye and Walk the Green Mile..
I spit hot he barely Speaks Mild not rugged or raw i'll leave em stuffed in a draw like Police Files!!..
loved this bar nice punch and flow 9/10
My punches hit joel venom heavy like soaked denom are you sure you wanna Cross this Young'n?..
I go full force when huntin! You winnin this event is happenin like mikes Tour in London!!..
liked this but your closer was a lil weak 7/10
ok great vesre but ur filler at the bottom killed it man. total 32/40 ok so ill go to cats
1:opener-Menace
1:closer-joel
2:flow-menace he never lost it and joel u lost it a lil on ur third bar
3:multis-tie
4:punches-id say a tie menace had harder ones in my eyes but his last line fell off which ment joels consistent ones caught up so ima say tie here
5:personals-niether really
Menace-10
joel-8
vote-menace great shit both of you id love to see a rematch maybe even an audio