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4 bars...you go first
ill drop max24h after you

peace

sorry i didn'post earlier, I've been busy

I'm in a Hurry dog, EHre it goes!

7:43pm

I'll leave yah Limbz Snap, cuz Quix Back wid a Diss Track!
your 'style is weak' so watch me put this 'child to sleep' Call it a Kid-Nap!
Fuck i'm desired tah higher someone tah Leave you Raped n Dead Slaughtered!
Escepe, N I'll Send Mobsterz! that'll 'treat you to shells' like Datez at Red Lobster
you have less WORTH than Ashanti, so Watch me Bless Herb Like Me Ghandi!
i'll Beat up yah Budz, then straight 'Sweep up yah hood' like Sweat-Shirtz in dah Laundry!

7:48pm


Pz, G'Luck Dog, Fair votez Only!

its all ok


your rap stink,more then you think/
you should look on engine *HOW TO RHYME* link/
shit!
that weird typin gives to rhymes bad-look/
whats with your punches??did you dig them from face-book/
you can be awarded just for be-in retarded/
or simply get D.Q for havin low I.Q/
you know that i speak-truth!!/
hardest punch you had,was when i kickd-you/

Uppin!! I'll Vote Later..

votes would be appreciated n Returned, drop a link!

well ..1st off practice makes perfect..

Quix
I'll leave yah Limbz Snap, cuz Quix Back wid a Diss Track!
your 'style is weak' so watch me put this 'child to sleep' Call it a Kid-Nap!
^^
"i'll leave yah limbz snap"?..thats forced ..punch made sense though..2.5/5


Fuck i'm desired tah higher someone tah Leave you Raped n Dead Slaughtered!
Escepe, N I'll Send Mobsterz! that'll 'treat you to shells' like Datez at Red Lobster
^^^
thats gotta be like the 20th time you used a shellz concept..sorry i heard you say the red lobster shit before too..1.5/5

you have less WORTH than Ashanti, so Watch me Bless Herb Like Me Ghandi!
i'll Beat up yah Budz, then straight 'Sweep up yah hood' like Sweat-Shirtz in dah Laundry!
^^^
sweep up ya hood?..well the punch made sense shoulda just said CLEAN OUT er something..2.5/5

6.5/15
P.T.R. ins

your rap stink,more then you think/
you should look on engine *HOW TO RHYME* link/
shit!
^^
i like the concept jus needs a bit more to make it a punch. 1.0/5

that weird typin gives to rhymes bad-look/
whats with your punches??did you dig them from face-book/
^^^
no punch and the multi didnt line up concept not quite there on this one.0/5

you can be awarded just for be-in retarded/
or simply get D.Q for havin low I.Q/
^^^
kinda funny no multi's no punch either...1.0/5

you know that i speak-truth!!/
hardest punch you had,was when i kickd-you/
^^^
if you do single rhymes it loses some of it's bite.
it looks like you tried for a punch on this though..
but it missed wide..jus keep elevating..you'll get better..1

yo quix that shit aint good!!!why you dropin old lines and shit...hmmm

WASN'T THE SAME LINE, but its simalar concepts!

Quix:


I'll leave yah Limbz Snap, cuz Quix Back wid a Diss Track!
your 'style is weak' so watch me put this 'child to sleep' Call it a Kid-Nap!
-Ok nuttin special...5/10

Fuck i'm desired tah higher someone tah Leave you Raped n Dead Slaughtered!
Escepe, N I'll Send Mobsterz! that'll 'treat you to shells' like Datez at Red Lobster
-I dont recall seein that line before, Decent line..7/10

you have less WORTH than Ashanti, so Watch me Bless Herb Like Me Ghandi!
i'll Beat up yah Budz, then straight 'Sweep up yah hood' like Sweat-Shirtz in dah Laundry!
-Weak Closer....4/10

Overall: 16/30

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PTR-ins:


your rap stink,more then you think/
you should look on engine *HOW TO RHYME* link/
-Set up is twisted but concept is ok i guess...5/10

that weird typin gives to rhymes bad-look/
whats with your punches??did you dig them from face-book/
-Na...2/10

you can be awarded just for be-in retarded/
or simply get D.Q for havin low I.Q/
you know that i speak-truth!!/
hardest punch you had,was when i kickd-you/
-Good attempt but just didn't land hard....4/10


Overall: 11/30



PTR you need to just fix your structure and make your punches hit harder and make it all flow much better...




16 > 11




V/Quix

Quix

I'll leave yah Limbz Snap, cuz Quix Back wid a Diss Track!
your 'style is weak' so watch me put this 'child to sleep' Call it a Kid-Nap!
^^ uhhmm kinda weak but decent
Fuck i'm desired tah higher someone tah Leave you Raped n Dead Slaughtered!
Escepe, N I'll Send Mobsterz! that'll 'treat you to shells' like Datez at Red Lobster
Well.. I'm still not convinced that SLAUGHTERED and LOBSTER really rhyme haha but i get where u were goin
you have less WORTH than Ashanti, so Watch me Bless Herb Like Me Ghandi!
i'll Beat up yah Budz, then straight 'Sweep up yah hood' like Sweat-Shirtz in dah Laundry!
I really like this line for some reason I was crackin up

P.T.R.


your rap stink,more then you think/
you should look on engine *HOW TO RHYME* link/
shit!
ehhh decent
that weird typin gives to rhymes bad-look/
whats with your punches??did you dig them from face-book/
oh wow that was super lame... c'mon man really? so forced it's not funny
you can be awarded just for be-in retarded/
or simply get D.Q for havin low I.Q/
just blahh on that one
you know that i speak-truth!!/
hardest punch you had,was when i kickd-you/
hmmmmm I dont really get that haha

VOTE = Quix

Actually had some bars.. But P.T.R. you might wanna cross over to audio cuz I havent seen your other drops but it looks like text is not gonna work out for you haha

3-0 Quix Wins...Close This!

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