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6 bars...
replay time -48h

-- Thu Sep 17, 2009 10:46 am --

lets go


now about this Scared Wus,hes rhymes are not complete/
he shout his Scar-ed Vers about chop and chewing dicks/(read his demonic battle against

i see that you tryin hard and still you do it wrong/
like that you are sibling of Chic or maybe Chong!!!/

you talk like a predator that eat MC-s for lunch/
but still..... my baby sister have harder punches/(she is 4years old)

i have read your battle scripts!dam like you are dumb!!!/
like you borrow battle skills from that dude Forest Gump!?!/

reason why you getting slain is be-cause you are so lame/
not even DR.DRE could help you to reach level up in *THE GAME*!!!!/(addressd on hes signature and lame concepts)

readin your rhymes...maaan...punchd me down in the stond/
fuck!!if you had support of Bush you still couldn't drop THE BOMB/(Bush American ex president)

-- Thu Sep 17, 2009 10:47 am --

now you haw 48h

Check

i see that you tryin hard and still you do it wrong/
like that you are sibling of Chic or maybe Chong!!!/

i made typo inn verse...its cheech or maybe chong(its from movie cheech and chong uo in smoke0

-- Sun Sep 20, 2009 1:22 pm --

48h expired...you are probably busy so ill wait 48h more

Thanks for the extension, I was working down in Boston this weekend...

I been checkin ya raps, ya shows in trouble and ya metas too Subtle/
The only way I "duck when ya pop" is "when ya bill slaps the Bubbles/ *Rubber ducky Mufucka!

But I got sick lines that split his slick lines six Times/
And leave em "cut more than when two bitches is Snippin Thighs!"/ Scissor-sex

But I peeped ya sig, shits whack, pink and black on some emo Shit/
Fittin colors for a punk suckered up like a fuckin D-Bo Hit!/

But on the real I seen more clips than would ever be Needed!/
You hungry for the fame? The obit's the best die-t, so shut up and Feed it!/

But on the real, you need to remember ya punches when you picnic Packin/
Cuz I came to battle a pimp, not the slut gobblin the balls like Pac-Man!/

fuck it, good enough!

it is good..nice verse..vote up !!!

Uppin!

PTR:


now about this Scared Wus,hes rhymes are not complete/
he shout his Scar-ed Vers about chop and chewing dicks/
-Na..Structure is very bad....3/10

i see that you tryin hard and still you do it wrong/
like that you are sibling of Chic or maybe Chong!!!/
-Weak Punch IMO....2/10

you talk like a predator that eat MC-s for lunch/
but still..... my baby sister have harder punches/
-ok line...leanin towards weak 4/10

i have read your battle scripts!dam like you are dumb!!!/
like you borrow battle skills from that dude Forest Gump!?!/
-Na...you need to elevate your punches 4/10

reason why you getting slain is be-cause you are so lame/
not even DR.DRE could help you to reach level up in *THE GAME*!!!!/
-Best line you dropped 7/10

readin your rhymes...maaan...punchd me down in the stond/
fuck!!if you had support of Bush you still couldn't drop THE BOMB/
-Ok closer..bush lines are played 5/10


Overall:25/60

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SacredVerse:



I been checkin ya raps, ya shows in trouble and ya metas too Subtle/
The only way I "duck when ya pop" is "when ya bill slaps the Bubbles/
-lol.. set up ok, made me laugh but kinda weak 6/10

But I got sick lines that split his slick lines six Times/
And leave em "cut more than when two bitches is Snippin Thighs!"/
-Nice Wordplay, multi's n punch hit 8/10

But I peeped ya sig, shits whack, pink and black on some emo Shit/
Fittin colors for a punk suckered up like a fuckin D-Bo Hit!/
Ok line...6/10

But on the real I seen more clips than would ever be Needed!/
You hungry for the fame? The obit's the best die-t, so shut up and Feed it!/
Na....3/10

But on the real, you need to remember ya punches when you picnic Packin/
Cuz I came to battle a pimp, not the slut gobblin the balls like Pac-Man!/
Ok closer little weak and played tho 5/10


Overall:28/50



This battle was "Ok" at its best both i felt really didn't come that hard in this one but SV just edged it over with his lines just makin more sence and his structure and flow is on point.PTR need to make is punches hit way more direct and just get your flow right and make sure you shit just flow's way better and ya punches hit and you might stand a chance i'll tell ya then..




V/SacredVerse

P.T.R
now about this Scared Wus,hes rhymes are not complete/
he shout his Scar-ed Vers about chop and chewing dicks/(read his demonic battle against
aight concept i guess..multi's are off and no punch 1.0/5


i see that you tryin hard and still you do it wrong/
like that you are sibling of Chic or maybe Chong!!!/
^^^
type o OK..still not very explanatory imo..1.0/5

you talk like a predator that eat MC-s for lunch/
but still..... my baby sister have harder punches/(she is 4years old)
^^^
again setup bar should "SET UP" the punch if possible. this was funny though ..2.0/5


i have read your battle scripts!dam like you are dumb!!!/
like you borrow battle skills from that dude Forest Gump!?!/
^^^
ummm..you tied the dumb and forrest gump..ehh i think this is your best bar so far? 2.5/5

reason why you getting slain is be-cause you are so lame/
not even DR.DRE could help you to reach level up in *THE GAME*!!!!/(addressd on hes signature and lame concepts)
^^^
aight this was legit punch a soft one but at least your gettin the idea 3.0/5

readin your rhymes...maaan...punchd me down in the stond/
fuck!!if you had support of Bush you still couldn't drop THE BOMB/(Bush American ex president)
^^^
what's stond?..i actually kinda liked the bush line..2.5/5

12.0/30



Sacred Verse
I been checkin ya raps, ya shows in trouble and ya metas too Subtle/
The only way I "duck when ya pop" is "when ya bill slaps the Bubbles/ *Rubber ducky Mufucka!
^^
nice punch IMO..structure and all's good..3.5/5


But I got sick lines that split his slick lines six Times/
And leave em "cut more than when two bitches is Snippin Thighs!"/ Scissor-sex
^^
liked the flow on the first line ..punch was kinda soft though..3.0/5

But I peeped ya sig, shits whack, pink and black on some emo Shit/
Fittin colors for a punk suckered up like a fuckin D-Bo Hit!/
^^
not feelin this punch as much as ya last..2.5/5

But on the real I seen more clips than would ever be Needed!/
You hungry for the fame? The obit's the best die-t, so shut up and Feed it!/
^^^
wasn't feelin this one much either maybe should've been worded different..but.2.5/5

But on the real, you need to remember ya punches when you picnic Packin/
Cuz I came to battle a pimp, not the slut gobblin the balls like Pac-Man!/
^^^
sorry Pac-man punch is reaally played..1.0/5

12.5/30

PTR you gotta get your vocab and grammar better so you can make your concepts more detailed..is all..

vote=Sacred

2-0 Uppin

Punches: Sacred
Flow: Sacred
Complexity: Sacred
Personals: tie
Creativity: Sacred



































you get it


mah vote Sacred!

3-0 KO!

it was K.O...sacred did it bether..i must admit so is
4-0 fore him
cuz he got my vote

he had more constan flow and hes punches were harder then mine(exep GUM,DRE,lil sister AND BUSH lines)
counting the punches he had 5 i had 3.5...
so i vote also for secred

some 1 please update this...
nice battle SV.thanks

-- Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:20 pm --

tho battle was tie:D

-records updated-