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Posted: **Sat Oct 17, 2009 4:19 pm**

I Hope All My True Homies Don't Lie in a Grave
I Hope All My Real Friends Don't Get By Like Sum Slaves
Wanna See Brighter Days Keep Ya On Eyes On The Shade
Look At Ya Roots Abstract N Realize What You've Made,
Of ya Self,you Don't Need No Help;Quit Cryin in Rage
It was Already Written your Just Finding The Page
Ripp It Out,White it Out start Redesignin With Age
Bad Times Are Like Weather And Climates a Phaze
When ya Mind Climb In a Maze..you Go Levels Higher
Watch ya Climbing Amaze ..

Posted: **Sun Oct 18, 2009 4:09 pm**

This is tight man im feelin this, dope flow, meaningful content and thats all that really matters, i agree it could have been longer but for what it is its nice good shit keep droppin

Posted: **Mon Oct 19, 2009 10:43 pm**

Interesting flow. Some memorable lines.

The only part that I didn't like, and its one of your habits that I'd love to see broken.

"It was Already Written your Just Finding The Page
Ripp It Out,White it Out start Redesignin With Age"

You redesign as the years go is what I would imply out of that. The only problem is, you're putting a whole other concept into one word being "age". If you said, I redesign as the age moves on that would be more proper grammatically and give the reader/lister a better grasp of what you mean.

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