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How many times have you glanced at your reflection just searchin/
For perfection but left feeling like less of a person/
Is it a lesson or curse when you've reached the conclusion/
That idealism is nothing more than a feat of illusion/
Its easily proven if your searching is cautious/
You'll look closer and see that no person is flawless/
I'm certain it causes a lapse in the mind/
But perhaps you will find we're a backwards design/
The attractive are blind, too crooked and shallow/
Too good for the hassle of looking in shadows/
They're cowards in spirit with their sour endearment/
So instead they focus on your outward appearance/
Now is it clear when I point to your lover/
And strip away their skin and leave the poison uncovered/
We destroy one another, ugly is tossed aside/
But the beautiful ones tuck all of these flaws inside/

Oh. Wow. That was perfect.

The attractive are blind, too crooked and shallow/
Too good for the hassle of looking in shadows/

Besides this one bar.

Lol I struggled with that one and wasn't sure if I should scrap but thought fuck it, its how I wrote it, leave it be. Preciate the feed though.

Nice drop ruckus..

Im feelin the whole piece from start to finish.

Good Shit.

sick stuff man, you know what im going to say, flow is there, concept is nice, the whole thing is quoteable

Great Drop.

Flow and multies were fantastic. It also seemed like you didn't base your lines around the rhyme.

Thanks peeps.