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EvilJoey wrote:Lookin into my Ex's Eyes as i stab my last pen Inside...
Then Perhaps jenn would cry...
im Lauhin as she Gasps... Grapsin that.... she then would
die!
fuck Murder... These verses are mass Gen- O- Cide

Decent Multies. I could feel the emotion from it.

Shit I makes a living at Killin Whores...
So Call my Number when ur no longer Feelin Yours..
my verses tell ya a thousand ways To Merk... but i know a
millions more
It just takes Practice.. but what the fuck else are Civilians for?
Evil vs joey... the Contest of Blood and villains
And whos Spillin More?

Good multies, flow jumped around, but was good when it matched


u thought joey was Evil? Well theres Fuckin Demons inside
Him...
And once hes Dreamin N vibe-in // u Homos will be
Screamin & hide-in//

Once again with the multies. Didn't really feel this line though.

All the weapons of mine u find are toys..
Sex Killin N rhymes ... Are the only things my Mind Enjoys..

I felt this line, once again, I felt the emotion behind it.

urged to kill..
lookin through radio and all i find is noise...
My mind is poised...
to detroy time and Joy...
Murder pays ....its hard times and Crime employs...

Overplayed on describing the subject. Once again I must say you did good with these multies. Flow was decent.

So remember That next time ur Thinkin of dropin a diss..
i'm lookin for people Hit... and youll be Toppin the list
my options are sick.. i can write me a verse.. or 'come off
the top like a brisk'

Above average punch and wordplay.

yes thats a Jewish cir-cum-cision...
Im sick as fuck... n u wish ur condition... was Merkin
Diction...
Im twitchin from my verb addiction... Im absurd with
fiction..
keepin it -locked down- like ur 3rd conviction..

Didn't really feel it for some reason. "So-So" metaphor


i'm Smashin any fagot whos text is avarage....
The passionate Dyslectic Savage
Fuckin with Heads.... like havin sex with Cabbage

Good vocab and great multy, but a little over the top on the last punch