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Posted: **Mon Nov 02, 2009 12:55 pm**

Come On Pipe Down i Burn a fiend
the Mic 'grips' My Soul Like a Term Fa Green
I Put My " All Into It" Like a Sippin Glass
Pitching Fast Disciplining i Stricken Cats
Striking Raps With Micing Stat's Matching Up
2 The Prime Of Mike Tyson's Tracks..Face To
Face..They Ain't Fighting Back..Case To Case
i'll Shock Um, i Know Where They Lightning Lacks
Throw That in The Mix, Storm In, Blow Gats in a
Trix Boring Pink! Hazards Accompanied By Warnin Ink
u Wouldn't Have a Shot On Da Mic.. Recording Drinks
You Pricks is Some Coochie been On My Dick with ya
Loosies, i Can Go Bar For Bar Till Someone Slips
Me a Roofie, i've Had drug O'ds Gettin Jipped By u Groupies
ill people have claimed To Slay The Knight Probably Why
Dood's Say They Is Bright but i've Had The Air They Can't
Stay a Flight..The Same one's Who Age In Fright Cus They
Don't Have What it Takes Ta Hype a Crowd,Till They Shake
The Site,Performed On, Morons Remain In Rage Fa Nights
Hating Life,The Rowdy Ain't Proud B, Reason Why i Stay
Calm After Every Match Like The Dating Site..
I'm Rocking Right Like The Whip Game Propa..
i Spit Flames Clock Da..Minutes Till i Finish ya Rosta
Drop The..Raps You Write Like a First Match,
You Can't Last The Fight..I Write Jabs With Hype
Pastiors Like, Think You Can Fly With Me??
Pass Ya Flight, You Ain't No Guest i Smash ya Type
Think What a Verse Could Do if a Few Punches Molded
Cashis Life..My Metaphors go Bananaz u Monkeys Can't
Keep Up! i Don't By ya Bullshit Like a Cheap Fuck...
My Lines Are Bleach Struck..Fuck The Skill u Eat Up
Every Leech Suck,It's Literal Get Left in Critical
It's Visible Suckahs Gotta New Visual..Like Feds
Scoping Crew Rituals.. Look,
I See Success i Dream Fa Mine, Me N My Team Combined
Will Seem Ta Shine, Yall Talk Like Transformers
When you Haven't Even Seen Ya Prime..
I'm Rockin Always Gotta Stay Clocked in..
Them Cats Don't Know What Working Bout,
Not Giving a 'Fucking Care On a Virgin Route
I Go For The Paper Like a Married Couple Who
Can't Work It Out,Get In My Way Like Extra Weight
N i Won't Hesitate Ta Make you Levatate..
I'ma Nice Guy Who Got The Right Eye For Seeing The
Mic Fried Cus I Keep a Verse Pure Like Tight Thighs

Posted: **Thu Nov 05, 2009 12:41 am**

You get an A for length lol. Nice to see more posts that go beyond the typical 16. Had some nice rhyme schemes, a little random with the topics but I remember some of this shit in the chatbox. The flow was good, not a whole lot stood out to me though. I've seen you write better, but at least you're still at it.

Posted: **Thu Nov 05, 2009 10:48 am**

$.@MB!T!0N.$ wrote:
...Hazards Accompanied By Warnin Ink
u Wouldn't Have a Shot On Da Mic.. Recording Drinks

This was by far my favorite line throughout. Overall I thought it was good, the way that I read it there was a good amount of multi's and I didn't catch some of the references until I read it aloud but when I did I was thinkin "damn". Keep em comin.

Posted: **Thu Nov 05, 2009 10:42 pm**

You Pricks is Some Coochie been On My Dick with ya
Loosies, i Can Go Bar For Bar Till Someone Slips
Me a Roofie

Reason Why i Stay
Calm After Every Match Like The Dating Site..

Will Seem Ta Shine, Yall Talk Like Transformers
When you Haven't Even Seen Ya Prime..

I Go For The Paper Like a Married Couple Who
Can't Work It Out

^Highlights, Especially The Married Couple Line That Was Fresh.

i Was Feelin a Lot Of The Punches But Ones Like 'Recordin Drinks' u Could've Done Without Unless u Slipped a Reference About a Bar in There Or Something Then it Wouldn't Seem Like Such a Stab in The Dark. That And The Fact That u Tried Fitting Too Many Rhymes in Were The Only Real Negative Points. u Kept Consistent With The Flow (And Still Would've Done So Without Those Few irrelevant Rhymes) But u Balanced it Out With Some Really Smooth Moments in The Drop. Not ur Best But Not ur Worst, Just Seemed Like an Average Day in The Office. Keep Pushing Yourself Man.

Posted: **Tue Nov 10, 2009 3:06 am**

i couldnt get into the flow if im honest, some real nice punches, nice multis, good word play, i fink its ur style that i find hard to flow with, i really wana hear this on audio so i can get the flow

props fam keeping dropping like this n ill keep enjoying it

Posted: **Tue Nov 10, 2009 9:01 am**

I was feelin' this I was also feelin' that line I read earlier
I think it was quoted already the recording drinks line

dope shit man
keep it up ~1~

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