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6 Bars//House Rules//etc.

I'm ready now, so as soon as you check in I'll drop.

Nike

You sigh lint, cuz all your verses are trash
I'm so violent with my words, I burn verbs into ash
I'll decay your environment with sounds that'll rem sleep ya
shoulda stayed silent cuz I'm bout to Grim Reap ya
You agreed to this mismatch? guess you thought I wasn't a writer
But You can't match me, so I hope you brought a lighter
Got multiple personalities, but you and your doppleganger
Will fall and topple like broken hangers to a complete total stranger
Claim to be God's Curse, to the point I'll set him straight
You're rap's version of the Detroit Lions in '08
Gotta be honest so I only scribe truths
No response? Now your name truly describes you

-- Wed Nov 18, 2009 10:07 am --

No show?

whoa. my bad. forgot let me write something rel quick

-- 19 Nov 2009 14:20 --

Alrighttt Alrighttt

Nike

’08 Lions lines? More like ’09 Indy Playing with a Reason //
No Hate but unlike you my coach doesn’t get fired mid-season//

My Lines Flow together so nice it blends with the ocean//
When yours dry up leaving you with no motion, oh shit//

Exploding up like lighters getting smashed on the ground//
Bigger fire than J’s Matches going on in his town//

Have you floppin on the deck like you striving for air//
Shootin fish in a barrel easier than Thriving to care//

About what dude has to say, shit you should go mute//
Because I come from day-to-day givin vocal chords the boot//

No matter how long you stay after school, practice don’t make perfect//
I’ll stay playing this fool ,if he cant hack this than he just cant hurt this//

Uppin for votes.

JJ, your opener was a little week...2nd bar was pretty cool with the name play. Liked the Gim Reapa line for some reason, match/lighter line was pretty funny too... didn't think you needed the word "total" in the doppleganger/stranger bar.. you can damn near pick any year for Detroit since Barry Sanders left LOL, closer was ok...

Silent - liked your opener, the next 3-4 bars were damn near fillers unfortunately; however it did flow quite well...probably would sound better in audio, closer was confusing... "if he can't hack this then he just can't hurt this" what the...????

Gotta give it to JJ.

Preciate it. 1-0

Catsweep For JJunior..

Dead Wat You Doin Man i thought you where gonna come back hard..




V/JJunior

Vote:JJunior

His verse had better flow, punches, and pretty much everything else.


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/mass- ... 14647.html

JJ catsweep really no need to explain other dude was just dissin him not really battling him.

4-0

That's a wrap.

JJunior77 wins by KO!








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