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I'm tryna...find...that ol pattern...

I step straight outta the spaceship
flew away, back on vacation
tryna find some air like a asian
in time square where my time's squared
hittin' the cymbal without my chair
so I'm drummin' a different instrument
tryna find a light to get intimate
no candle to light tho'
so my light's low as my ego
tell the world what we know
a artist deprived on his freethrow
his point or his last chance to be known
papers roll up but they ain't scriptures
they ain't teachings and they ain't pictures
I'm tryna fight depression with a pill
I'm tryna fight death with a will
but I can't move on without the skill
I hate myself on days I can't write good
but I love myself on days I might cook
satisfyin' hunger
that's defyin' wonder
cuz cookin' might be healthy for soul
but it really won't help me with a bowl
I don't know what the fluck I just said
but the sky might fall cuz kid cudi said
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pause for the cause

just freewriting right now

"tryna find some air like a asian" - lost me on that one.

Didn't quite get this drop QZ, couldn't tell if you were trying to be a rapper or a chef.

kept me interested tho LOL

I think it woulda sounded better as a audio
cuz it's supposed to mix into the next air

tryna find air like a asian in times square
my times squared...la la la LoL
but I don't know I just wrote it like that outta wrecklessness

I'm still tryna find my flow
I got the rhymes minus a flow LoL