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Ok Ma Nicca..

4-5 Bars Due 2morrow 11:59
(imma drop tonite)

This is my check.

At least ya spelled ma name right, give me a second
and I'll come and disgrace ya already win-less record
Cap ya like Contra*, fight back, I want cha
cause I'll "Smoke ya Piff**" like I'm puffin on tha ganja
Come hard man, I know you NEED to, you're battling ME dude
I'll leave ya in the "ER from Shells" like you allergic to seafood
Couple minutes they be hittin' ya
The closet you've had to smokin' someone else,
is when you rep the picture in ya signature

*Old shooting game
**Good weed

-- 25 Nov 2009 16:40 --

bump

-- 25 Nov 2009 16:48 --

BUMP!!!

At least ya spelled ma name right, give me a second
and I'll come and disgrace ya already win-less record

Eh, okay opener.

Cap ya like Contra*, fight back, I want cha
cause I'll "Smoke ya Piff**" like I'm puffin on tha ganja

Expected nameplay, coulda been more creative with it.

Come hard man, I know you NEED to, you're battling ME dude
I'll leave ya in the "ER from Shells" like you allergic to seafood

Lol nice punch.

Couple minutes they be hittin' ya
The closet you've had to smokin' someone else,
is when you rep the picture in ya signature

Eh. Second line was stretched a bit. Punch was lacking, especially for a closer.




Chyll Fukka I Get Plenty Broads Dont Let The Semi-Roar
Cuz Ill Make This Mark Echo(mark eco) Like A Graffiti Artist Held A Seminar!!

Decent opener, nothing too standout.

Ma Nicca Im Nice Wit Frees Put Knives To Theives Have You "Coppin Please"
While You Drop To Ya Kness Leave Mass Heart Skippin A Beat Like When He Sneeze!!

Not feelin it at all. You changed the rhyme scheme at the end of the first line and the punch was lacking.

See Fukka Im Real Wit It gotta Ill Mind You See No Crime
Cuz Ya Bars Aint Doin Shit To Me Like "Tonic and Lime"!!

Okay.

Dat GloCc Bout To Spit Call The Doc In This Bitch Im Stoppin Ya Spits
Fukka You Not On Da List My Punches Beat You Every "Time" Like Theres A "CloCk" On My Fist!!

Better punch, but stretched.

So Last Bar To Victory You Aint Shit B Your Bars Aint Sickly They Just Shitty
Cuz The Only Time Niggaz Look Forward To Fukin Wit Mass Effect/Mass Effekt Is Playin 360!!

Best punch of the verse. Good nameplay, not sure if its been used before. Lines were stretched though.



Decent battle. Both had a couple punches that stood out, the rest kinda seemed like filler though.

Flow- Mass
Multies - Tie
Punches - Tie
Nameplays - Piff

In theory, this battle is a tie according to the cats. But them stretched bars hurt the flow a lot, Piff. So I gotta go with Mass because of that.

vote: Mass Effekt

1-0


Uppin

Punches-Joey
Multies-Joey
Wordplay-Joey
Creativity-Tie
Personals-Joey
Nameplay-Tie
Flow-Mass Effekt



Overall Joey i felt came with a Harder Verse then mass in this one, Mass dropped a decent verse i just dont think it was the best here.






V/Joey Piff

Well, I'll say this.. I believe Mass's was a true keystyle created off the top. While Joey's seemed Pre-written until the last line... be that as it may... I have to give it to him for punches. Short but entertaining. I liked Mass's seafood line, but the last line was out of structure. Joey's flowed well.

vote=Joey

2-1 Joey..Uppin Votes!!

bumpy bump!

This Battle has been open for 2 weeks so that means the person with higher amount of votes as of right now is the winner. Which is Joey Piff votes being 2-1.



Joey Piff Wins by TKO






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