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I am set alone a deprived steppin' stone
head to depths below sad as I'm headin' home
I swear I should be lettin' go nothin' left to flow
cracklin' like a set of bones my quest blessed the phone
*pick up*

Hello and I hope you pay no disregard
he steps up his bars uppin' like fitted's are
known to flow steppin' like he bow to bow
hittin' coast to coast sleep on me comatose
never spit hard so they ain't known to vote
show a peak I could grind hard 4 shows a week
those close to me mad poppin' like soda's be
I am the stingin' butterfly and the floatin' bee
I roll up the books and burn em like Germany
higher then birds in the dream of cursive streaks
I supply the current leap from ledge ends to adversity
shoe box flow erryone needs to be conversin' me
now I'm workin' with dirty feats sextapes n nerdin' peaks
handle cameras nervously but don't hate the learnin' please
I stay typin' up the hidden verbs seein' if hidden works
I can ride high blowing up like the hindenburg
now I'ma relax as my fitted turns changing wind adverssse
scary, hitting like Hiroshima blowing out emphazema
and here it is we give the features hot like indonesia
never been a leader but now I'm leadin' the tentative
sittin' back leisure be like my style it gets repetitive
so I'm tired of shittin' this goodbye if you gettin' it?

im diggin it. a little disjointed but dope.
"I stay typin' up the hidden verbs seein' if hidden works
I can ride high blowing up like the hindenburg" was sick

upping!

nice flow, my answer i m deaf but i can say do not force urself on a rhymes n think slow n think good so here u go

Damn, yer definitely elevating. Had some mad nice wordplay and metaphors. Some slick rhyme schemes and flow. Keep this shit up and you'll be a force to be reckoned with.

deff feelin it, alotta hard lines.
"I stay typin' up the hidden verbs seein' if hidden works
I can ride high blowing up like the hindenburg"

and a few other bullets, but that was my fav, lookin forward 2peepin part 2

big upps

this is one of yah best writtens that i've read...this shit had countless quotables and impecable flow, n content!!


props dude, looking forward to reading part 2 and 3