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-MenaCe- wrote:ThaOneYouHate:


i'm So Cold i Could Contract Syphilis Then Get Rid Of it
i'll Play Tag With Shells 'Til Tha Bid is Hit This Kid is Sick
i Could Ride A Line With Ritalin 'Til Tha Riddle's Thin
Supply Fiends With Bags Tha Different Colored Skittles in
Picture Parapalegics Doin Standup Police Placed in Handcuffs
My Words Attack Quicker Than Beauticians Faced With Dandruff
No Need To Battle On i Step in Tha Booth Even Though Tha Lab is Gone
My Name's Carved in Greatness Joshua Destroyed Jericho Then Went After Babylon
You'll Be Thinkin This is Hell There's No Tellin How Much Shit i Sell
i Got A Team Behind Me Even My Soldiers Come Equipped With Shells
i'll Turn Jason Vorhees Leave Ya Chopped Up With Ya Campin Gear
You Think Tha Camp is Near? Theres Another Conflict Cuz Tha Champ is Here
You Can Catch A Body Call it An Early Christmas Gift
i'ma Legend Niggas There's No One Sick As This!

nice shit here
the multies were fire the punches were nice
unique lines in their original shit
like the paraplegics doin stand up LMAO
very dope verse


Damn!!!!!!!



My Turn!!



MenaCe:


Goin Hard is an addiction inflicted in my Way Of Life..
Treat Ya Necks Like Records...I'll make sure that i Break Em Right!!
Runnin Rampade while laughin at ya fallin soldiers that Ain't Chantin..
Truth'll Stand Fuk a superman! they'll hang em self Wit there Cape's Fastened!!
Uncontrollable no calmin down tha Type ah MotherFucka that Exceeds Limits..
Never Speaks Timid Its Iraq for these Bitches N you'll see how i Treat Woman!!
Degraded committing killins wit such statements so Harsh and Direct..
Punches lodged Far in there Chests bullets are as hard as Farve's At his Best!!
Hit Ya like a Ton of Bricks like wen the towers fell and you where Under It..
You Studder Shit! We spit A bunch of Wit plus got Pounds A pressure to Crush Ya With!!
Hope Ya Feel Scared And realize that the niggaz your Fuckin with Are Real Here..
These fake hustlers gettin played like the great rucker ridin 20's...in a Wheel Chair!!
Please believe in the best ya far from the boss you aint even Reachin Tha Desk..
This sorta shit should be often kicked! We Slaughted It N aint Fuckin Cleanin Tha Mess!!


first bar was dope shit very nice opener
second bar woo nice superman shit but the rhyme was off
third bar women lol nice rhyme a nice bar
the rest were all nice great job

this collab was dope all round and look forward to seein more shit from ya







Murder!!!

-MenaCe- wrote:ThaOneYouHate:


i'm So Cold i Could Contract Syphilis Then Get Rid Of it
i'll Play Tag With Shells 'Til Tha Bid is Hit This Kid is Sick

The first line was real creative.

i Could Ride A Line With Ritalin 'Til Tha Riddle's Thin
Supply Fiends With Bags Tha Different Colored Skittles in

Once again, I liked the first line.

Picture Parapalegics Doin Standup Police Placed in Handcuffs
My Words Attack Quicker Than Beauticians Faced With Dandruff

Nah.

No Need To Battle On i Step in Tha Booth Even Though Tha Lab is Gone
My Name's Carved in Greatness Joshua Destroyed Jericho Then Went After Babylon

The rhyme is good.

You'll Be Thinkin This is Hell There's No Tellin How Much Shit i Sell
i Got A Team Behind Me Even My Soldiers Come Equipped With Shells

Good bar.

i'll Turn Jason Vorhees Leave Ya Chopped Up With Ya Campin Gear
You Think Tha Camp is Near? Theres Another Conflict Cuz Tha Champ is Here

Perfect rhyming.

You Can Catch A Body Call it An Early Christmas Gift
i'ma Legend Niggas There's No One Sick As This!

Kind of a filler, as a final bar. Still a decent bar though.


A vintage drop from JJ, displaying a good portion of his talents lyrically.


MenaCe:


Goin Hard is an addiction inflicted in my Way Of Life..
Treat Ya Necks Like Records...I'll make sure that i Break Em Right!!

I'm feeling this one.

Runnin Rampade while laughin at ya fallin soldiers that Ain't Chantin..
Truth'll Stand Fuk a superman! they'll hang em self Wit there Cape's Fastened!!

Cool bar.

ncontrollable no calmin down tha Type ah MotherFucka that Exceeds Limits..
Never Speaks Timid Its Iraq for these Bitches N you'll see how i Treat Woman!!

Now, I really like this bar. Good wordplay.

Degraded committing killins wit such statements so Harsh and Direct..
Punches lodged Far in there Chests bullets are as hard as Farve's At his Best!!

When I read this the first time, a day or two ago, this bar stood out to me, its pretty memorable, albeit slightly played.

Hit Ya like a Ton of Bricks like wen the towers fell and you where Under It..
You Studder Shit! We spit A bunch of Wit plus got Pounds A pressure to Crush Ya With!!

Think this bar pertained a dope concept. I just couldn't ascertain it.

Hope Ya Feel Scared And realize that the niggaz your Fuckin with Are Real Here..
These fake hustlers gettin played like the great rucker ridin 20's...in a Wheel Chair!!

Ok. I didn't completely understand where you were going with this bar.

Please believe in the best ya far from the boss you aint even Reachin Tha Desk..
This sorta shit should be often kicked! We Slaughted It N aint Fuckin Cleanin Tha Mess!!

Good ending bar.

Overall, a solid verse, that highlighted some of your strong attributes.


Murder!!!